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Week 2
On Monday, we had a presentation about an entrepreneur. Our group presented about the CEO of Trung Nguyen Coffee, Mr. Dang Le Nguyen Vu, who is known as “Vietnam’s Coffee King”. Our group did the presentation so well, and others group also did the impressive works. It is not only the presentation about the entrepreneurs, but it is more likely a discussion to motivate people make their own business. I could see that my classmates put so much passion into their presentations, and they taught me some useful lessons. The most impressive lesson is that you should know who you are, what you really want to do, before decide to do something, because success is not only about money, success is a feeling when you satisfied about yourself.
On Thursday, we had a small party in class, we started to run our business, and Mr.Dung bought our products (like food and drink) to encourage our business. I thought that we would do not study anymore and just enjoy the food together. However, Mr.Dung kept teaching after that, he taught about ‘Entrepreneur-Breakthrough
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I have to write a learning log. Could you correct it for me, please?
Week 2On Monday, we had a presentation about an entrepreneur. Our group presented about the CEO of Trung Nguyen Coffee, Mr. Dang Le Nguyen Vu, who is known as “Vietnam’s Coffee King”. Our group did the presentation so well, and the other groups also did impressive works. It was not only a presentation about the entrepreneurs, but it was more likely a discussion to motivate people to make their own business. I could see that my classmates put so much passion into their presentations, and they taught me some useful lessons. The most impressive lesson is that you should know who you are, what you really want to do, before decide to do something, because success is not only about money, success is a feeling when you are satisfied with yourself.
On Thursday, we had a small party in class, we started to run our business, and Mr Dung bought our products (like food and drink) to encourage our business. I thought that we would not study anymore and just enjoy the food together. However, Mr Dung kept teaching after that, he taught about ‘Entrepreneur-Breakthrough'.
very well written!
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