The scary blond
This is a true history of my town. In Aracaju, state capital of Sergipe in Brazil, there is a blonde scary. She ride in a motocicle with othe person. She have cotton on the nose and on the heard. There is blood in the cotton. When gets nigth, arround 10 pm, she started to scare all the people that walks in place whitout some one. She stop in the front at schools to scare the school lookout. She and your pilot stay next to de driver´s car and scary them. The perfect place wich she use to scare is a dark place. She gets next you and make you shake and get scared.
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The scary blond
This is a true history of my town. In Aracaju, state capital of Sergipe in Brazil, there is a scary blonde woman scary. She rides in a motorcicle with another person. She has cotton on the her nose and on the her heard. There is blood in the cotton. When it gets nigth dark (or you can say 'when night comes') around 10 pm, she starts to scare all the people that walks in place whithout someone. She stops in the front at of schools to scare the school lookout. She and your pilot (pilot?) stay next to de the driver´s car and scare them. The perfect place which she uses to scare is a dark place. She gets next to you and makes you shake and get scared.In English it is important to remember that we conjugate it/she/he with an s ending, which is your most common error. ("it/she/he USES' is correct 'it/she/he USE' is incorrect)
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