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Social network Social network is a topic that is particulary close to me because I'm studying software engeniering. Mi degree is related to social networks. For me personally, this topic has a lot of advantages, but can be converted is something quite dangerous in the way we use them. On the one hand, these connections can help with a variety of thing such as: finding a romance, seeking a new job. Have you ever use social network to find a job?. To continue, We can accesing news in real time and comment it. Moreover, we save time doing certain things, for example buy online or banks papers. On the other hand, the use os social network are produce cyberbullying. more and more children suffer this harassment. In addition we expouse our private life, in other words, many people don't know where the limit is between the private and public life. Do you think that we expouse our life? In conclusion, I agree with social networks, but always with moderate use.

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Social network

Social network is a topic that is particularly close to me because I'm studying software engineering. My degree is related to social networks. For me personally, this topic has a lot of advantages, but can be converted is (into?) something quite dangerous in the way we use them.

On the one hand, these connections can help with a variety of thing such as: finding romance or seeking a new job. Have you ever used social network to find a job?. To continue, We can access news in real time and comment it. Moreover, we save time doing certain things, for example we  can  buy online or banks papers.

On the other hand, the uses of social network are producing cyberbullying. more and more children suffer this harassment. In addition we expose our private life, in other words, many people don't know where the limit is between the private and public life. Do you think that we expose our life?

In conclusion, I agree with social networks, but always with moderate use.
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