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Today I have to present this proyect: phrasal verbs, vocabulary and others Leonardo DiCaprio was born on November 11 in 1974 in Los Angeles, California. Leo is the only child. Leonardo Dicaprio's personality fits with many descriptions of the article "Born to be Wild". I have several reason to say that. First, In that article says "Kids without siblings often have traits similar to firstborn kids" Only children tend to be academically-able, ambitious and good at following parent's rules and self-disciplined. Well, Leonardo's life is devoted to investigations into the unknown, and finding the answers to the mysteries of life. Leonardo strives for high quality end results. He takes on his work with responsability. He is easy to get along with, and he has natural ability to save money and pool up economic resources. Second, In that article says "only child usually are quite confortable around adults" so they have never had to interact with siblings or companions of a similar age, they can have trouble relating to coworkers and can feel out of control when things in their life don't go their way. Well, Leonardo DiCaprio prefers to work alone. He needs time to contemplate his ideas without the intrusion of other people's thoughts. He is alone wolf and a person who lives by his own ideas and methods. DiCaprio needs his space and privacy There's no doubt that birth order can dictate your personality but "It’s important to remember that your personality and your destiny in life is not predetermined at birth."

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Today I have to present this proyect: phrasal verbs, vocabulary and others

Leonardo DiCaprio was born on November 11 in 1974 in Los Angeles, California. Leo is the only child.

Leonardo Dicaprio's personality fits with many descriptions of the article "Born to be Wild".

I have several reason to say that.

First, In that article says as mentioned in this article "Kids without siblings often have traits similar to firstborn kids" Only children tend to be academically-able, ambitious and good at following parents' rules and self-disciplined.
Well, Leonardo's life is devoted to investigations into the unknown, and finding the answers to the mysteries of life. Leonardo strives for high quality end results. He takes on his work with responsaibility.
He is easy to get along with, and he has natural ability to save money and pool up economic resources.

Second, In that article say, as pointed out in the article, "only children  are usually quite comfortable around adults". However,  as they have never had to interact with siblings or companions of a similar age, they can have trouble relating to coworkers and can feel out of control when things in their life don't go their way. Well, Leonardo DiCaprio prefers to work alone. He needs time to contemplate his ideas without the intrusion of other people's thoughts. He is a lone wolf and a person who lives by his own ideas and methods. DiCaprio needs his space and privacy

There's no doubt that birth order can dictate your personality but "It’s important to remember that your personality and your destiny in life is not predetermined at birth."


Hope this has been useful. All of the problems essential at this level have been corrected. Consider the phrase "as mentioned/ pointed out/ stated" instead of "In that article it said" (which is wrong.) Also pay attention to parents' rules (both parents) VS parent's rules (one parent's rules)





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Today I have to present this project: phrasal verbs, vocabulary and others

Leonardo DiCaprio was born on November 11 in 1974 in Los Angeles, California. Leo is an only child.

Leonardo Dicaprio's personality fits with many descriptions of the article "Born to be Wild".

I have several reason to say that.

First, In that article it says "Kids without siblings often have traits similar to first-borns" Only children tend to be academically-able, ambitious and good at obeying their parents and being self-disciplined.
Well, Leonardo's life is devoted to investigations into the unknown, and to finding answers to the mysteries of life. Leonardo strives for high quality end results. He takes on his work with responsibility.
He is easy to get along with, and he is naturally frugal and can pool up economic resources.

Second, In that article, it says "only children are usually quite comfortable around adults" . They have never had to interact with their piers, so sometimes have troubles relating to colleagues and can feel out of control when things in their life don't go their way. Well, Leonardo DiCaprio prefers to work alone. He needs time to contemplate his ideas without the intrusion of other people's thoughts. He is a lone-wolf and a person who lives by his own ideas and methods. DiCaprio needs his space and privacy

There's no doubt that birth order can dictate your personality but "It’s important to remember that your personality and your destiny in life is not predetermined at birth."

Very well written!

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