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Beauty secrets Last day I watched a television show about beauty secrets. It was a documentary made by a woman traveling all over the world in order to reveal beauty secrets of people in each country. In this section she went to Japan; there she managed to have a visit with a beauty witch! Yes! That's what they call women who stay young and beautiful in their old age. Although she believed that witch has a more positive meaning in Japanese than in english culture, something like miracle. She then talked about her beauty secrets. She said that beyond being skin care specialist, she exercises 15 minutes a day and eats healthy food. Then they had a healthy breakfast together. Something made with Soya sauce and Tofu! And the most important part was when the beauty witch was asked about her age. Until that moment I was assuming she might be around 40 who looks like 30. But the answer amazed me! "I am is 63", She replied! Can you believe that! She had taken no surgery on her face except a Botox filling into her smile line.

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Beauty secrets

Yesterday I watched a television show about beauty secrets. It was a documentary made by a woman traveling all over the world in order to reveal beauty secrets of people in each country. In this episode she went to Japan; where she managed to have a visit with a beauty witch!
Yes! That's what they call women who stay young and beautiful in their old age. Although she believed that witch has a more positive meaning in Japanese than in English culture, something like "miracle". She then talked about her beauty secrets. She said that beyond being a skin care specialist, she exercises 15 minutes a day and eats healthy food.
Then they had a healthy breakfast together. Something made with soy sauce and tofu!
The most important part was when the beauty witch was asked about her age. Until that moment I was assuming she might be around 40 but looked like 30. But the answer amazed me! "I am is 63", she replied! Can you believe that! She had never had surgery on her face except a botox filling into her smile line.


-English is a proper noun, so needs to be capitalized. Botox, soya, and tofu are not proper nouns.

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Then they had a healthy breakfast together. Something made with Soy sauce and Tofu! 

And the most important part was when the beauty witch was asked about her age. Until that moment I was assuming she might be around 40 who looks like 30. But the answer amazed me! "I am 63", She replied! Can you believe that! She had taken no surgery on her face except a Botox filling into her smile line.
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