I Got My Hair Cut
I got my hair cut yesterday, and not long after I regretted having my hair cut in the barber shop at my school. This new hair-cut looked awful once it was completed, and I hated myself for having said "A little shorter, please." That had happened once before, but I was so naive thinking that this shop would be more reliable.
I've had terrible luck; this has happened twice now. Idiots will visit this barber shop again, but I won't. What I'm waiting for now is for my hair to grow faster... I will be more cautious when choosing a barber shop to get my hair in future...
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I Got My Hair Cut
I got my hair cut yesterday, and not long after I regretted having my hair cut (it done) in the barber shop in (at) my school (my school's barber shop). The (this) new haircut seemed (looked) terrible (awful) when I first saw it finished (once it was completed), and I hated myself that had for having said, "A little shorter, please." It had (This has) happened once before, but I was so naive considering (thinking) (that) there must be a good barber shop in (at) my school. (this shop would be any better/OR more reliable).As I went to another one, that's what happened.(I've had terrible luck; this has happened twice now. Stupid guys (Idiots/Fools) will visit that this barber shop again, but I won't. (I've learnt my lesson.) What I'm waiting for now is for my hair to grow (faster). I'll be more cautious when choosing a barber shop to have (get) my hair cut next time (in future)...
Good job Jerry!
I recommend replacing the underlined text with that in brackets ().
It is a bit strange to have a school with a barber shop (or a barbershop in/at a school) Is it beside (near) your school? Also, if it's a barber training college, you could mention the trainee barber. Generally well-written though!
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I Got My Hair Cut
I got my hair cut yesterday, and not long I instantly regretted having my hair it cut in the barber shop in my school's barber shop. The new hair-cut seemed terrible when I first saw it finished, and I hated myself that I had said "A little shorter, please." It had happened once before, but I was so naive considering to think that there must be a good barber shop in my school. As I went to another one, that's what happened That's what happened when I went to another one. Stupid guys will visit that barber shop again, but I won't. What I'm waiting for now is my hair to grow faster out. I will be more cautious choosing a barber shop to have my hair cut next time.Want to progress faster?
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