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Statements - New vocabulary. 1- I will store these groceries in the pantry. THEREAFTER, I will do the dishes. 2- She enjoyed CHANTING that song in the song. 3- He's kind of GREEDY guy. 4- Some people MOCKED him the first time he made a mistake dancing with the group. (Correct and make suggestions if you are a native English speaker or an English teacher. Thanks in advance) 5- Our friends came here to URGE us to go to the bar and drink. 6- He was such as angry that he only BLURTED out to her “get out here!” 7- Izalco’s volcano was called “LIGHTHOUSE of Pacific” because of its long LAVA ERUPTION. 8- In 2005 Santa Ana’s volcano had an ASH ERUPTION. 9- They are earning BIG BUCKS! 10- I don’t think I HAVE THE PIPES when I speak English.

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Statements - New vocabulary.

1- I will store these groceries in the pantry. THEREAFTER, I will do the dishes. ('thereafter' is usually used when referencing the past so this example seems off. 'I stored the groceries in the pantry, Shorty thereafter, I did the dishes.')
2- She enjoyed CHANTING that song ['part' is better here] in the song.
3- He's kind of a GREEDY guy.
4- Some people MOCKED him the first time he made a mistake dancing with the group.

(Correct and make suggestions if you are a native English speaker or an English teacher. Thanks in advance)

5- Our friends came here to URGE us to go to the bar and drink.
6- He was such as so angry that he only BLURTED out to her “get out here!” (I think blurted has an unexpected connotation, 'He blurted out the answer without raising his hand.')
7- Izalco’s volcano was called “LIGHTHOUSE of the Pacific” because of its long LAVA ERUPTION.
8- In 2005 Santa Ana’s volcano had an ASH ERUPTION.
9- They are earning BIG BUCKS!
10- I don’t think I HAVE THE PIPES when I speak English. (Pipes usually refers to singing, not just speaking in general, 'I don't think i have the pipes to sing that song.')

Besides those slight definition changes the grammar looks good.

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