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Company Offer Letter Dear Johnson, It is from my honor to receive a job offer from your company. It was a nice to meet you in the interview last week . Your company is located in Indiana city and As I already informed you I have two children, they are studding in the primary school in Hilton city, I used to deliver them to their school daily. There is no hostel for student in the primary schools. we now in the middle of the education year so I can't move my children to a new school in Indiana. on the another hand I can't commute for 300 Kilometer daily . Al thought you give me an attractive salary, working hours in your company is long, I work for only 42 hours weekly in my current job. For these reason, I am not able to join your company. I appreciate your concern to add me to your company professional team. I hope you a more success toward your goals and for your company more prosperity in business world. thank you again for your time. Yours Sincerely, Hassan Ali

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Company Offer Letter

Dear Mr. Johnson,

It is an honor to receive a job offer from your company. It was nice to meet you in the interview last week.

Your company is located in Indiana and, as I already informed you, I have two children studying in Hilton City elementary school. I take them to school every day. There is no hostel for student in the primary schools ((don't really know what you mean here -- someplace where your kids could live during the week while attending school?)). As we are now in the middle of the school year, I cannot move my kids to a new school in Indiana. Furthermore, the 300km daily commute is difficult.

While the salary is attractive, the working hours are too long. I currently work only 42 hours per week in my current position.

For these reasons, I am unable to accept your offer. Thank you again for considering me for this position and I wish you and your company every success in the future.


Sincerely,

Hassan Ali


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It is not necessary to go into so much detail when rejecting a job offer. The following would be sufficient:

It was an honor to receive a job offer from your company. It was nice to meet you in the interview last week.

While the position is attractive, I must decline your offer due to the length of the commute and moving my children during the school year which would be difficult. Thank you again for considering me for this position and I wish you and your company every success in the future.

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