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Sport in school What do I see when I browse my facebook or instagram? The answer is very obvious - thousands of photos of fitness models, healthy dishes and gym tips. I've been promoting healthy (or fit, whatever) lifestyle for almost 2 years (I'm 17, so for me 2 years equal forever). In spite of my love for every single fitness propagator, I must admit that many of them show as if the only way to be agile is doing exercise with their CD's, alternatively drinking protein shakes in an expensive nike bottle. I don't judge them, but, please, don't call yourself a 'fitness consultant' if you're just a good entrepreneur. I strongly believe thet everyone can fall in love with sport. Many of us have already done it and I think that this obstructive rest doesn't really know what sport actually is. As I said, doing squads is not the only way to be 'FIT", even if it's the biggest part of your PE lesson. Probably you'll warm to sweat over time, but on the very beginning it is necessary to find sport for you. Are you fond of playing volleyball? Join a local club! Do you dream about windsurfing? Find a course! Do you like doing burpees? I don't beliece you, nobody likes burpees. The very meaning is to do what you really want to do. People should know that feeling pleasure is not the opposite to burn calories. School should help us. We need interesting lessons - not interesting for most, interesting for every individual person. Students should be able to develop his skills and, primarily, interests. I believe we must stop wondering what we can do in order to bring students around to sport. Everyone likes although a few sports (even if he hasn't known it yet), but on PE lesson they've got to play volleyball all the time. To sum up, if we want to show students that sport is cool and make them interested in it, we don't have to buy more equipment or build new pitches - we have to change uor mentality, our approach. Thank you for reading! I know, it's long and I am so grateful :)

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Sport in school

What do I see when I browse my facebook or instagram? The answer is very obvious - thousands of photos of fitness models, healthy dishes and gym tips. I've been promoting the healthy (or fit, whatever) lifestyle for almost 2 years (I'm 17, so for me 2 years equals forever). In spite of my love for every single fitness propagator, I must admit that many of them  look as if the only way to be agile is to do exercise with their CD's or alternatively drinking protein shakes in an expensive Nike bottle.

I don't judge them, but, please, don't call yourself a 'fitness consultant' if you're just a good entrepreneur. I strongly believe that anyone can fall in love with sport. Many of us have already done it and I think that this obstructive rest don't really know what sport actually is.

As I said, doing squats is not the only way to be 'FIT", even if it's the biggest part of your PE lesson. Probably you'll warm to sweat over time, but at the very beginning it is necessary to find a sport for you. Are you fond of playing volleyball? Join a local club! Do you dream about windsurfing? Find a course! Do you like doing burpees? I don't believe you, nobody likes burpees!

The very meaning is to do what you really want to do. People should know that feeling pleasure is not the opposite of burning calories.

Schools should help us. We need interesting lessons - not interesting for most, interesting for every individual person. Students should be able to develop their skills and, primarily, their interests. I believe we must stop wondering what we can do in order to bring students around to sport. Everyone likes a few sports (even if they don't know it yet), but in PE lessons they've got to play volleyball all the time.

To sum up, if we want to show students that sport is cool and make them interested in it, we don't have to buy more equipment or build new pitches - we have to change our mentality, our approach.

Thank you for reading! I know, it's long and I am so grateful :)


Hello Ania, 

It is quite long but it is generally well written with just a few small corrections. There is some really good language here.


Well done


Bob

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Sport in school

What do I see when I browse my facebook or instagram? The answer is very obvious - thousands of photos of fitness models, healthy dishes and gym tips. I've been promoting healthy (or fit, whatever) lifestyle for almost 2  two years (I'm 17, so for me 2  two years equals forever). In spite of my love for every single fitness propagator, I must admit that many of them make it seem like  show as if the only way to be agile is doing exercise with their CD's, and alternatively drinking protein shakes in an expensive Nike bottle.

I don't judge them, but, please, don't call yourself a 'fitness consultant' if you're just a good entrepreneur. I strongly believe thet that everyone can fall in love with sport. Many of us already have, and those who haven't, don't really know what sport actually is. already done it and I think that this obstructive rest doesn't

As I said, doing squads squats is not the only way to be 'FIT" "fit", even if it's the biggest part of your PE lesson. Probably you'll warm to sweat over time, but on at the very beginning it is necessary to find the right sport for you. Are you fond of playing volleyball? Join a local club! Do you dream about windsurfing? Find a course! Do you like doing burpees? I don't beliece believe you, nobody likes burpees.

The very meaning The most important thing is to do what you really want to do. People should know that feeling pleasure is not the opposite to of burning calories.

School should help us. We need interesting lessons - not just interesting for the majority, but interesting for every individual person. Students should be able to develop his or her skills and, primarily, interests. I believe we must stop wondering what we can do in order to bring students around to sport. Everyone likes some kind of although a few sports (even if he/she doesn't know it yet hasn't known it yet), but on in PE lessons they've got to play volleyball all the time.

To sum everything up, if we want to show students that sport is cool and make them interested in it, we don't have to buy more equipment or build new pitches - we have to change uor our mentality, our approach.

Thank you for reading! I know, it's long and I am so grateful :)

Hi Ania,

Great job! I enjoyed reading your entry. Keep up the great work!

Best,

Liz



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Sport in School

What do I see when I browse my Facebook or Instagram profiles? The answer is very obvious - thousands of photos of fitness models, healthy dishes and gym tips. I've been promoting a healthy lifestyle for almost 2 years (I'm 17, so for me 2 years equals forever). In spite of my love for every single fitness propagator, I must admit that many of them just try to convince us that the only way to be in shape is doing exercise with their courses on DVD, alternatively drinking protein shakes from an expensive Nike bottle.

I don't judge them, but, please, don't call yourself a 'fitness consultant' if you're just a good entrepreneur. I strongly believe that everyone can fall in love with sport. Many of us already have and the rest who hasn't,  don't really know what sport actually is.

As I said, doing squats is not the only way to be 'fit", even if it's the biggest part of your PE lesson. You'll probably sweat enough over time, but at the very beginning it is necessary to find a sport that's right for you. Are you fond of playing volleyball? Join a local club! Do you dream about windsurfing? Find a course! Do you like doing burpees? I don't believe you, nobody likes burpees.

The very meaning is to do what you really want to do. People should know that feeling pleasure is not the opposite of burning calories.

School should help us. We need interesting lessons - not interesting for the teachers, but interesting for every individual student, who should be inspired to develop their skills and, primarily, their own interests. I believe we must stop wondering what we can do in order to bring students around to sport. Everyone likes at least a few sports (even if they haven't played them yet), but on PE lessons they just get to play volleyball all the time.

To sum up, if we want to show students that sport is cool and make them interested in it, we don't have to buy more equipment or build new pitches - we have to change our mentality, our approach.

Thank you for reading! I know, it's long and I am so grateful :)

*Just a contribution. Hope this helps :)

 

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