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Is this letter better than that in my previous notebook? I have to send that written better. " LETTER HEAD Rome, 24th May 2017 KindAtt: Fit Via Cavour, 156 00132 Roma [email protected] Subject: Letter of intent Refering to the Rome estate located in Via Appia nr. 297, with this manifestation of non-binding interest , the undersigned Company / Person Physical .................. .. ........................................................................... .................. with head office / resident in ..................................................................................................................... ................ ........................, is pleased to represent our interest in further and eventual purchase of the above mentioned property. Therefore, we ask you to be able to access to the "Data Room" and view the related documentation in order to proceed with the creation of a policy of an irrevocable and binding purchase proposal of which the terms and conditions will be better formulated and specified then. This is a mere expression of preliminary and indicative interest; therefore it does not constitute, nor can it be interpreted as a contractual proposition, or a preliminary contract or an option contract, and consequently who write it does not have any obligation in relation to the purchase of the property and the continuation of any negotiations concerning the same. Waiting for a kind reply Best Regards "

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Is this letter better than that in my previous notebook? I have to send that written letter.

" LETTER HEAD

Rome, 24th May 2017

KindAtt:
Fit
Via Cavour, 156
00132 Roma
[email protected]



Subject: Letter of intent


Referring to the Rome estate, located in Via Appia nr. 297, with this manifestation of non-binding interest , the undersigned Company / Person Physical .................. . with head office / resident in ..........................., is pleased to represent our interest in further and eventual purchase of the above mentioned property.


Therefore, we ask (you) to be able to (for) access to the "Data Room" and to view the related documentation in order to proceed with the creation of a policy of an irrevocable and binding purchase proposal of which the terms and conditions will be better formulated and specified then.


This is a mere expression of preliminary and indicative interest; therefore it does not constitute, nor can it be interpreted as a contractual proposition, or a preliminary contract or an option contract, and consequently, he or she (the undersigned) who wrote it does not have any obligation in relation to the purchase of the property and the continuation of any negotiations concerning the same.

Waiting for a kind reply,


Best Regards "


- Hi Vivianna. The letter is quite well-written. Having said this, I don't know if it needs to be so technical/legalistic/contractual. You are inquiring about/for basic information, you may get a quicker response with a less formally written letter.

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