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Do you think that it's really important to see eye to eye with your friends or it's OK to disagree?
It’s very сomplicated question.
On the one hand the answer is «No» because I have many friends who doesn’t always share my interests and points of view on many things, for example about nutrition, vegetarianism and child education.
On the other hand it’s very important for me that my friends be on the same wavelength with me in matters relating to my important values such as the respect for other people, the value of family relations and aspiration to self-development.
Thank you for your help.
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Do you think that it's really important to see eye to eye with your friends or it's OK to disagree?
It’s very сomplicated question.
On the one hand The answer can be "no" because I have many friends who don't ( "friends" is a plural noun and comes with "don't ) always share my interests and points of view on many things, such as nutrition, vegetarianism and child education.
On the other hand, it’s very important for me that my friends be on the same wavelength as (we use the preposition "as" to indicate a comparison between your friends and you) me in matters relating to my important values such as the respect for other people, the value of family relations and aspiration for self-development.
Thank you for your help.
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Hi! Please check my text and correct the mistakes
Do you think that it's really important to see eye to eye with your friends or is it OK to disagree?This is a very сomplicated question.
On the one hand the answer is «No» because I have many friends who don't always share my interests and points of view on many things, for example about nutrition, vegetarianism and child education.
On the other hand it’s very important for me that my friends be on the same wavelength with me in matters relating to my important values such as the respect for other people, the value of family relations and aspirations of self-development.
Thank you for your help.
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Hi! Please check my text and correct the mistakes
Do you think that it's really important to see eye to eye with your friends or is is OK to disagree?It’s very сomplicated question.
On the one hand the answer is «No» because I have many friends who don’t always share my interests and points of view on many things, for example about nutrition, vegetarianism and child education.
On the other hand it’s very important for me that my friends be on the same wavelength as me in matters relating to important values such as the respect for other people, the value of family relations and aspiration to self-development.
Thank you for your help.
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Hi! Please check my text and correct the mistakes
Do you think that it's really important to see eye to eye with your friends or that it is OK to disagree?This is a very complicated question.
On the one hand the answer is «No» because I have many friends who do not always share my interests and points of view on many things, for example about nutrition, vegetarianism and child education.
On the other hand it’s very important for me that my friends be on the same wavelength with me in important matters for me, such as respect for others, the value of family relations and personal ambition.
Thank you for your help.
Very well written!
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