Can you help check the sentence, please!
After he finishes class, he's going to organise his room. Because he just moved to a new house at Kangaroo Point near Shafston collage. He can walk about 10 minutes to Shafston collage. He is't going to level up test this week because he wants to finish all book. Naturally, He will go back to his country in December. He will plan to get married when he 30 years old. He has a plan to travel before he go back. He wants to going to Parth. Actually, Parth has very beautiful beaches. Of course, This important thing he hope if he win lotteries. He will send half his money to his family to set up business.
I try to write a story because I would like to improve my English skill. Can you help check and correct the sentence, please! Thank you.(^_^)''
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Can you help check the sentence, please!
After he finishes class, he's going to organise his room because he just moved to a new house at Kangaroo Point near Shafston college. Shaftson College is a 10 minute walk (from his home). He can walk about 10 minutes to Shafston collage. He isn't going to take the level up test this week because he wants to finish all the whole [or "all of the book"] book. Naturally, he will go back to his country in December. He will plans to get married when he is 30 years old. He has a plan to travel before he goes back. He wants to going to Perth. Actually, Perth has very beautiful beaches. Of course, This important thing He hopes if he to [or "that he will"] win the lotteriesy. He will send half his money to his family to set up a business.I try to write a story because I would like to improve my English skill. Can you help check and correct the sentences, please! Thank you.(^_^)''
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