Introduce myself
Hello, everyone. Today I want to introduce myself. I am a girl who come from China. I am 20 years old, undergraduate in an university. Although I major English, my English is not very well. Espeacially my written, sometimes I extremely want to express my inner thinking, but when I hold a pen, it's still difficult to write down. I hold my pen then put it down many times. It's really need brave to begin to write. Besides, my pronunication is too terrible. I remember that day, when I concentrated on my English book, my partner interruptted me and asked" What are you doing?" "Reading English," I said. Surprisingly, she told me, "I bet you are speaking Japanese!" You never imagine my face, full of red. What an unforgetable experience! From my high school up to now, I afraid of speaking, I afraid other people laugh at me. It just like a hurt. This semester, I choose Japanese as my second language because of anime. I love it very much. What's more, I love Japan's culture, language, food and ect. I even want to live in Japan in the future. I appreciate this country.
Finally, I want to thanks for that person can sacrifice their time to amend my article. Thank you very much.
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Introducing myself
Hello, everyone! Today, I want to introduce myself. I am a girl who comes from China. I am a 20 years old undergraduate (currently) in (at) an university. Although I major in English, my English is not very well good, (I don't speak/write well), especially (particularly) my written work/English.Sometimes I extremely really want to express my inner thinking thoughts, but when I hold a pen, it's still difficult to write them down (articulate them). I hold my pen, then put it down many times. It's I really need to be brave in order to begin to write.
Besides, my pronunciation is too terrible too (as well). I remember that (one particular) day, when I was concentrating on my English book, when my partner interrupted me and asked," What are you doing,?" "Reading English," I said (responded). Surprisingly, she told me replied, "I bet you're speaking Japanese!"
You could never (couldn't) imagine (picture) my face, full of red it was bright red. What an unforgettable experience, (for all the wrong reasons)! - (an unforgettable experience - it is more commonly a positive experience - a trip of a lifetime - it was unforgettable)
From my Since high school up to (until) now, I have always been afraid of speaking, I afraid that other people would laugh at me. It just like a hurt. This has hurt/slowed my progress.
This semester, I choose Japanese as my second language because of anime. I love it very much (a lot). What's more, I love Japanese culture, language, food and etc. I even want to live in Japan in the future. I appreciate this country.
Finally (To conclude), I want to thanks for that the person can who sacrifices their time to amend my article.
Thank you very much!
- Well-written! I recommend replacing the underlined word/s with those words in brackets.
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Introduce myself
Hello, everyone. Today, I want to introduce myself. I am a girl who come from China. I am a 20 years old undergraduate in a university. Although I major English, my English is not very well. Especially my written english, sometimes I extremely want to express my inner thinking, but when I hold a pen, it's still difficult to write down. I hold my pen then put it down many times.I really need brave to begin to write. Besides, my pronunication is too terrible. I remember that day, when I concentrated on my English book, my partner interrupted me and asked" What are you doing?" "Reading English," I said. Surprisingly, she told me, "I bet you are speaking Japanese!" You never imagine my face, full of red. What an unforgetable experience! From my high school up till now, I afraid of speaking, I am afraid other people will laugh at me. It just hurts. This semester, I chose Japanese as my second language because of anime. I love it very much. What's more, I love Japanese culture, language, food, e.t.c. I even want to live in Japan in the future. I appreciate this country.Finally, I want to say thanks to the person that can sacrifice their time to amend my article. Thank you very much.
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