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The party for my uncle to celebrate his 60th birthday Last Saturday, my family and relatives had a party for my uncle to celebrate his 60th birthday. The place of party was a sushi restaurant. The time of party had been at 6:30 p.m. and my family arrived there at 6:20 p.m.. But the time of appointment was postponed until 7 p.m., my relatives arrived there then. All of my family and relatives were 14 persons and additional 5 persons who were uncle's friend came there. We ate dinner and talked each other during the party. Many relatives asked how they had were getting along and talked about various topic. My cousins were 4 persons there. One of them was my cousin whom I had not seen for over 10 years. My cousins, including her, and I promised to keep in touch. The party ended at around 10 p.m. and the earlier generation continued 2nd party after that.

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The party for my uncle to celebrate his 60th birthday

Last Saturday, my family and relatives had a party for my uncle to celebrate his 60th birthday. We held it in a sushi restaurant. The time of party had been arranged for 6:30 p.m. and my family arrived there at 6:20 p.m. But the time of the party was postponed until 7 p.m when all my relatives arrived there.
There were 14 members of my family and relatives there and an additional 5 people who were my uncle's friends. We ate dinner and talked to each other during the party. Many relatives asked how they had been getting along and talked about various topics.
There were four of my cousins there, one of them was my cousin who I had not seen for over 10 years. My cousins, including her, and I promised to keep in touch.
The party ended at around 10 p.m. and the younger generation continued a 2nd party after that.

Hello Seonhui,

I could understand everything about your party but I just rearranged some of the language to make it more natural.

Best wishes


Bob


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