Let's prepare a soup
Hi everyone!
When the temperature is low is time to have delicious food like a hot chocolate, soup or fondue.
Today I chose make a soup with vegetables.
First of all, I peeled poteto and carrot then chopped then, and chopped zucchini too.
I take chicken that I've picked at cube and braised it with butt and onion, after that I add water, vegetables and keep it boil for 20 minutes.
To finish my soup I add salt and green seasoning.
That' s tasty.
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Let's prepare a soup
Hi everyone!When the temperature is low, it is time to have delicious food and beverages like a hot chocolate, soup, [1] or fondue.
Today I chose to make a soup with vegetables.
First of all, I peeled a potato poteto and a carrot. I then chopped then, them and chopped zucchini too.
I take took chicken that I've I had picked at cube [2] and braised it with butt butter and onions. After that I added water, and vegetables and keep kept it boiling for 20 minutes.
To finish my soup I added salt and green seasoning.
That's tasty.
[1] - This last comma is called the Oxford Comma. It isn't technically required but is better style.
[2] - I am not sure what you mean here.
Overall, I would recommend working on tense agreement. You started your recipe with the past tense (I chose / I peeled) and then switched to the present tense. You want to be consistent.
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