20 May 2017
I woke up early in Saturday morning with noise pollution. Because of building construction next to my flat. I have to move myself to another place to escape noisy sound. I went to nice cafe', ordered some tea and enjoyed that moment with a good book. It was quite and peace. There are two edges of sword.
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20 May 2017
I woke up early on Saturday morning because of noise pollution caused by building construction that was going on next to my flat. I had to move myself to another place to escape the noise. I went to a nice cafe, ordered some tea and enjoyed the moment with a good book. It was quiet and peaceful. (There are two edges of sword - Do you mean that the noise pollution was a double-edged sword because although it was annoying, it led to your having a nice experience at the cafe?)0
20 May 2017
I woke up early in on (1) Saturday morning with due to the noise pollution. Because of As there is a construction site building construction next to my flat, I have to move myself to another place to escape the noisy sound. I went to nice cafe', ordered some tea and enjoyed that moment with a good book. It was quite quiet and peaceful (2). There are two edges of sword.*Hi Nattaporn,
Just a few suggestions for you:
(1) We use the preposition "on" to describe a day of the week. (Example: Lectures are held in school on Tuesdays and Wednesdays.)
However, we say that something is held in the morning, in the afternoon or at night.
(2) "peace" is a noun to indicate a quality of serenity and calmness of the mind. Here, you are using the adjective "peaceful" to describe the place (which is a noun).
*I believe you are referring to the idiom: Double-edged sword.
Perhaps you can write: My stay in the cafe is a double-edged sword, because I could only enjoy the peace in a place that I do not own.
Hope this helps
Cheers,
Lance
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I woke up early in on Saturday morning with due to noise pollution, Because of caused by building construction next to my flat. I'll have to move myself to another place somewhere else to escape noisy sound this noise. I went to a nice cafe, ordered some tea and enjoyed that moment enjoyed myself with a good book. It was quite quiet and peace peaceful. There are two edges of to a sword.
Well done :)
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20 May 2017
I woke up early in Saturday morning with noise pollution. Because of building construction next to my flat. I have to move myself to another place to escape noisy sound. I went to a nice cafe', ordered some tea and enjoyed that moment with a good book. It was quite and in peace. There are two edges of sword.Want to progress faster?
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