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Check it please Dear Larry, Hi my friend! How are you? I want to tell you about my plans for a journey to London. Friday, 23: I`am going to stay at Earl`s Inn hotel in London city centre. I want to stay at the Earl`s Inn hotel in city centre, London. Saturday, 24: I plan to visit some of London`s museums in the morning. Also, my plans contain to visit a shop in Oxford Street in the West End. In addition my aim that to find some bargains in Top Shop. However my dream is to have dinner at Planet Hollywood in Piccadilly - a really popular place with tasty food and great music! Sunday, 25: I must catch 10 o`clock train back to Liverpool. And yes, Larry! Do you want go with me on a weekend-visit to London? I would be glad to it! With love, Marya.

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Check it please

Dear Larry,
Hi my friend! How are you? I want to tell you about my plans for a trip to London.
Friday, 23:
I'm going to stay at Earl's Inn hotel in London city centre.
I want to stay at the Earl's Inn hotel in the city centre of London.
Saturday, 24:
I plan to visit some of London's museums in the morning. Also, my plans include to visit a shop on Oxford Street in the West End. In addition my aim is to find some bargains in Top Shop. However my dream is to have dinner at Planet Hollywood in Piccadilly - a really popular place with tasty food and great music!
Sunday, 25:
I must catch the 10 o'clock train back to Liverpool.
And yes, Larry! Do you want go with me on a weekend-visit to London? I would be glad to hear it!

With love, Marya.

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Hi Марья,

  This is a lovely entry, and I hope the two people get to go to London together! I did not have to change much at all: mostly just accent marks, one going from left to right ( ` ), the other going from right to left ( ' ). With contractions and possessives (I'm; Earl's) we usually use the accent mark going from right to left ( ' ).

Well done on this! Let me know if you have any questions.

Best,

Julie

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