My difficult journey
Every morning starts a difficult journey, it's part of my routine, because I have to go to work from Monday to Friday.
I left home early in the morning, and I take a bus in the same street that I live, usually this bus stops in every corn to get passengers, then this travel take about 60-80 minutes, if I go by car this same itinerary take about 30 minutes.
When I arrive Caxias downtown I got off the bus and I walk away to Caxias train station, this time is the worst for me, because the trains is too crowded, many people aren't polite. There are many hawkers into the train, they shoutting and hurt people with your products, and the most of them don't care ask you "excuse" when them have to pass between the people.
I have to stay in the train about 40 minutes from Caxias to São Cristóvão.
Finally, when my destiny arrives I have to walk away during 5 minutes to my work.
And in the end of the day I have to do it again, because I have to return home.
It isn't easy, these things make my day stressfull. Unfortunately I need to earn money, this difficult journey is part of this.
(It's my homework, I have to do a composition about my difficult journey. I hope you can help me!)
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My difficult journey
Every morning starts is a difficult journey. It's part of my routine because I have to go to work from Monday to Friday.I left leave home early in the morning and I take a bus (in the same street that I live *Note: This makes sense, but isn't a phrase you would usually use), which usually this bus stops in every corner to get passengers. then This travel takes about 60-80 minutes. If I go went by car, this same itinerary this trip would take about 30 minutes.
When I arrive downtown Caxias downtown, I got get off the bus and I walk away to Caxias train station. This time is the worst time for me, because the trains is are too crowded and many people aren't polite. There are many hawkers into on the train they who shoutting and hurt people with your their products, and the most of them don't care ask you say "excuse me" when them they have to pass between through the people.
I have to stay in on the train for about 40 minutes from Caxias to São Cristóvão.
Finally, when my destiny destination arrives I have to walk away during for five minutes to my work.
And in At the end of the day, I have to do it again! because I have to return home.
It isn't easy, and it these things makes my day stressful. Unfortunately I need to earn money, and this difficult journey is part of how I do that this.
(It's my homework, I have to do a composition about my difficult journey. I hope you can help me!)
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My difficult journey
Every morning is the start of a difficult journey, it's part of my routine, because I have to go to work from Monday to Friday.I leave home early in the morning, and I catch the bus on the same street that I live on. usually this bus stops on every corn to get passengers, then its route takes about 60-80 minutes, if I go by car this same itinerary takes about 30 minutes.
When I arrive at Caxias downtown I got off the bus and I walk to Caxias train station, this is the worse time of day for this stretch of the trip. because the trains is too crowded and a lot of people aren't polite. There are many hawkers on the train, they shout and hurt people with your products (last part needs clarification) and most of them don't care to ask you "excuse me " when they have to pass between the people.
I have to stay on the train for about 40 minutes from Caxias to São Cristóvão.
Finally, when I reach my stop, I have to walk about 5 minutes to my work.
And at the end of the day I have to do it all over again, because I have to return home.
It isn't easy, these things make my day stressfull. Unfortunately I need to earn money, this difficult journey is part of this.
(It's my homework, I have to do a composition about my difficult journey. I hope you can help me!)
it's very good. Keep up the good work.
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