Self-introduction in English
Good morning!I am Olivia,a freshman majoring in Public Administration.I am a down-to-earth and a little quiet girl with a cheerful attitude.In the future I would like to be a civil servant to serve people wholeheartedly and revitalize the Chinese nation.Additionally,I have many hobbies such as reading,music,running ,traveling and so on.I am crazy about Chinese traditional music,especially Pipa.Of course,I am a huge fan of Jay Chou,which create the Chinese style pop music.In my leisure time,I always contribute my time to volunteer at exhibition,nursing home and primary school.In the end,wish you good health.
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Self-introduction in English
Good morning!I am Olivia,a freshman majoring in Public Administration.I am a down-to-earth and a little quiet girl with a cheerful attitude.In the future I would like to be a civil servant to serve people wholeheartedly and revitalize the Chinese nation.Additionally,I have many hobbies such as reading,music,running ,traveling and so on.I am crazy about Chinese traditional music,especially Pipa.Of course,I am a huge fan of Jay Chou,which create the Chinese pop music style .In my leisure time,I always contribute my time to volunteer at exhibition,nursing home and primary school.In the end,wish you good health.Thanks for your listening!
Really Good so far you just have that tiny mistake....
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Self-introduction in English
Good morning!I am Olivia,a freshman majoring in Public Administration.I am a down-to-earth and a little quiet girl with a cheerful attitude.In the future I would like to be a civil servant to serve people wholeheartedly and revitalize the Chinese nation.Additionally,I have many hobbies such as reading,music,running ,travelling and so on.I am crazy about Chinese traditional music,especially Pipa.Of course,I am a huge fan of Jay Chou, who gave Birth to the Chinese style pop music.In my leisure time,I always contribute my time to volunteer at exhibitions,nursing homes and primary schools.In the end, I wish you good health.Thanks for your listening!
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Very good indeed!!
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