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Suki is an artist based in japan, born in the year 1983, with the name Naoki Kobayashi. She studied art at Tokyo University and made her degree specializing in abstract art in the year 1998. As an Artist, she defines her purpose to focus on the inner world and to make this in her work visible. In an achieving society, just like ours, emotions are secondary. With the help of her work, she intends to feature it and make the inner world tangible for the beholder. By use of her expressive style and surreal ideas, she visualizes the inner world of a subject. At the moment, she works with mixed media; she arranges her pencil drawings on the computer with paper and watercolor textures.
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Suki is an artist based in Japan, born in the year* 1983, with the name Naoki Kobayashi. She studied art at Tokyo University and made her degree specializing in abstract art in the year 1998. As an artist, she defines her purpose to as focusing on the inner world and to making this visible in her work visible. In an achievement-based society, just like ours, emotions are secondary. With the help of her work, she intends to feature {expose?}** it and make the inner world tangible for the beholder. By using of her expressive style and surreal ideas***, she visualizes the inner world of a subject. At the moment, she is working**** with mixed media; she arranges her pencil drawings on the computer with paper and watercolor textures.*This is fine, but a very German way of saying the year. We usually just say "born in 1983", "studied art in 1998", etc.
**The use of "feature" is ambiguous here. I think you mean "expose it" or "point it out" here (with "it" referring to this phenomenon of relegating emotions as secondary}
***Or: "Through her expressive style..."
****"At the moment" signals a present continuous .
Great job! You have an excellent grasp of English, so my corrections were more like nitpicky precisions. :)
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