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Implementation of a tablet-based program for all educational stages I am writing to draw your attention on the increasing use of new technologies in all things that surrounded us. We depend on new technologies more than ever. If we look back at ordinary things we usually do, we will realize that our life is increadibly dependent on technology. New trends show us that this situation is far away to reduce. A new policy of implementation of a Tablet-based program in education is being discussing at parliament. If this measure would be approved, it would not be needed that students would use second-hand books from previous students. I must admit that implementation of this policy have advantages and drawbacks. Firstly, students would not have to bring heavy bags to school. Everyday, we can see how teenagers carry heavy backpacks where they put in all the books they need to attend at class. Experts warn us that an excessive weight could cause backache. If the program were approved no physical books would be required and therefore this problem would be eliminate Secondly, upgrading and updating of all the materials used at class would be very easy and cheap. In addition to this, all digital material could be uploading into the cloud where children could do their homework regardless where they would be. However, students that use new technologies to study have less capacity to stay focus on, according to some researches published in prestigious in journals. Technologies help us to get a lot of information although our capacity to remember is scarce. Another drawback is the fact that students could not take notes in the books when they are listening to their teacher. As a result, different approaches to study should be required. Last but not least, the cost to put in practice this program is very expensive for families, especially for those with low incomes. It would be necessary a clear policy to subsiadise to those families who can not afford to buy tablets. All in all, new technologies are changing our tools in education. Old methods should be replaced by new ones. We will inevitable have to do. There is not another way.

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I am writing to draw your attention on  to the increasing use of new technologies in all things that surrounded us. We depend on new technologies more than ever. If we look back at the ordinary things we usually do, we will realize that our life is increadibly dependent on technology. New trends show us that this situation is far away to reduce. ( Maybe "...is unlikely to reverse") A new policy of implementation of a tablet-based program in education is being discussed in parliament. If this measure would be is approved,  students would not need to use second-hand books from previous students. I must admit that implementation of this policy would have advantages and drawbacks.
Firstly, students would not have to bring heavy bags to school. Every day, we can see how teenagers carry heavy backpacks  filled with all the books they need for their classes. Experts warn us that carrying an excessive weight could cause backache. If the program were approved, no physical books would be required and therefore this problem would be eliminated
Secondly, upgrading and updating of all of the materials used at in class would be very easy and cheap. In addition to this, all digital material could be uploadeding into the cloud where children could do their homework regardless of where they are. would be.

According to some research published in prestigious journals however, students that use new technologies to study have less capacity to stay focused. Technologyies helps us to get a lot of information although our capacity to remember is diminished scarce.
Another drawback is the fact that students could not take notes in the books when they are listening to their teacher. As a result, different approaches to study shwould be required.
Last but not least, the cost to put this program in practice are very expensive for families, especially for those with low incomes. It A clear policy would be necessary to subsidise to those families who could an not afford to buy tablets.
All in all, new technologies are changing our tools in education. Old methods should be replaced by new ones. We will Change is inevitable. There is not another way.

advantages and disadvantages,

I suggest benefits to be the opposite of drawbacks

everyday (adj.) that means ordinary

every day (each day)



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