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170518 I have stayed at home for six month preparing for an examination for going abroad. It is such a long time for leaving workroom after postgraduate. But at last, the performance is unsatisfactory because, in one ways, I made too high goal at the beginning, and in the other way, maybe I am too old for academic study. To sum up In a word, the results frustrate me. The day before yesterday, my friend introduce a new job for me, And because so interested in this position, I send my curriculum vitae to him immediately. At that night, I made a divination with zhouyi, the Chinese tradition divine method, and got a very good prediction. Unfortunately, in this afternoon, my friend told me that, in the interview at this noon, the boss said he wants a cheaper employee, almost a half of my prices. A sad news again.

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I have stayed at home for six months preparing for an examination for going abroad. It is such a long time for leaving workroom after postgraduate study. But at last, the performance is results are unsatisfactory because, in one ways, I made my goal too high goal at the beginning, and in the other way, maybe I am too old for academic study. To sum up In a word, the results frustrated me.

The day before yesterday, my friend introduced a new job for me., And because I was so interested in this position, I sent send my curriculum vitae to him immediately. At that That night, I made a divination with zhouyi, the Chinese tradition divine method, and got a very good prediction. Unfortunately, in this afternoon, my friend told me that, in the interview at this noon, the boss said he wants a cheaper employee, almost a half of my price prices. A  Sad news again.

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Hi Bosen.Vo,

In your second sentence, I was not sure what you meant by "leaving workroom after postgraduate", but I took a guess that you mean it was a long time to stop working after completing your postgraduate study. I hope that was accurate. I am sorry you did not get this position, but others will become available. You are definintely not too old for academic study. Learning a language combined with academic work is a huge challenge. This is the first time I have commented on someone's notebook entry, so I hope my corrections help you.

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I have stayed at home for six months preparing for an examination for going abroad. It is such a long time for leaving workroom I don't understand what you mean here after postgraduation. But at last in the end, the my performance is unsatisfactory because, in one ways, I made too high a goal at the beginning, and in the other another way, maybe I am too old for academic study. To sum up In a word, the results frustrate me.

The day before yesterday, my friend introduced a new job for  to me, And because I was so interested in this position, I sent my curriculum vitae to him immediately. At that night, I made a divination with zhouyi, the Chinese traditional divine method, and got a very good prediction. Unfortunately, in this afternoon, my friend told me that, in the interview at this noon, the boss said he wants a cheaper employee, almost a half of my prices. A sad news again.
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170518

I have stayed at home for six months preparing for an examination for going abroad. It is such a long time for leaving workroom after postgraduate. But at last, the performance is unsatisfactory because, in one ways, I made too high goal at the beginning, and in the other way, maybe I am too old for academic study. To sum up In a word, the results frustrate me.

The day before yesterday, my friend introduced me to a new job for me, and because I was so interested in this position, I send my curriculum vitae to him immediately. At that night, I made a divination with zhouyi, the Chinese tradition divine method, and got a very good prediction. Unfortunately, in this the afternoon, my friend told me that, in the interview at this noon, the boss said he wants a cheaper employee, almost a half of my prices. A sad news again.

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