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A HEAVY LOAD A day a woman decided to go acrros her country, for the first time in her life, she didn´t have to look after nobody, not anymore she had to work, she was so happy ... Next day her decision She started to make her backpack, it was too much heavy, but she thought that she will be able to support her weight. After three days she was tired, after six days she was very tired, after nine days she was very very tired, and after eleven days she decided to abandon her adventure; but when she came back she meet a man who had crossed 3 times his country . -It is impossible to carry on your backpack, it is very heavy, you have to throw some things- told the man -But I never throw nothing, I don´t know how can I do it- answered the woman -Don´t worry, let me I help you like someone helps me, said the man with affection. So all these things you should throw if you want to start you journey. -Let me see, told the woman and she put into a bag all her fear, despair, insecurity ... and so on. She never left to walk until her death

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A HEAVY LOAD

One day a woman decided to go across her country for the first time in her life, she didn´t have to look after anybody, not anymore she had to work she didn't have to work anymore , she was so happy ... Next day her decision: She started to make her backpack, it was too much heavy, but she thought that she will would be able to support her weight.
After three days she was tired, after six days she was very tired, after nine days she was very very tired, and after eleven days she decided to abandon her adventure; but when she came back she meet met a man who had crossed 3 times his country 3 times .
-It is impossible to carry on with your backpack, it is very heavy, you have to throw some things- told said the man
-But I never throw nothing anything, I don´t know how can I can do it- answered the woman
-Don´t worry, let me I help you like someone helped me, said the man with affection.
So all these things you should throw if you want to start your journey.
-Let me see, told said the woman and she put into a bag all her fear, despair, insecurity ... and so on. She never left to walk until her death

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