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Can you correct my mistakes, please? Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. In your English class you’ve been talking about learning with a teacher or by yourself. Nowadays, some students prefer to learn by themselves than with a teacher. Recently, I read a article about learning languages without studying at a academy with teachers. This article says that if you usually receive lessons of English at a academy, you learn the language more slowly. I would like to explain my reasons regarding why I don’t agree with that idea. Currently, students have more difficulty to study because they have stopped spending time at library. Teenagers prefer to go out with their friends or practise sports. Due to this, I think that it is better to have a teacher and can receive lessons that help you in your learning. What’s more, if you go to class with a teacher you will do different activities such as listening, reading or speaking in English to improve your skills. All in all, at present is very important have good knowledge about your subjects of school and you should pay attention to your teachers.

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Can you correct my mistakes, please?

Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. In your English class you’ve been talking about learning with a teacher or by yourself.
Nowadays, some students prefer to learn by themselves than with a teacher. Recently, I read an article about learning languages without studying at a academy with teachers. This article saysclaimed that if you usually receive lessons of English English lessons at a academy, you learn the language more slowly.
I would like to explain my reasons regarding why I don’t agree with that idea. Currently, stiudents have more difficulties to study because they have stopped spending time at library. Teenagers prefer going out with their friends or practising sports.
Due to this, I think that it is better to have a teacher and can be able to receive lessons that help you in your learning. What’s more, if you go attend to class with a teacher you will do different activities such as listening, reading or speaking in English in order to improve your skills.
All in all, at present is very important to have good knowledges about your school subjects and you must pay attention to your teachers.
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Can you correct my mistakes, please?

Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. In your English class, you’ve been talking about learning with a teacher or by yourself.
Nowadays, some students prefer to learn by themselves than with a teacher. Recently, I read an article about learning languages without studying at an academy with teachers. This article says that if you usually receive English lessons at an academy, you learn the language more slowly.
I would like to explain my reasons regarding why I don’t agree with that idea. Currently, students have more difficulty studying because they have stopped spending time at the library. Teenagers prefer to go out with their friends or practise sports.
Due to this, I think that it is better to have a teacher so you can receive lessons that help you in your learning. What’s more, if you go to class with a teacher, you will do different activities such as listening, reading or speaking in English to improve your skills.
All in all, at present it is very important to have good knowledge about your school subjects and you should pay attention to your teachers.

The things I highlighted in green aren't mistakes, but native speakers tend to use contractions in their speech and writing so instead of "it is", we would probably say "it's" more. Also, you could leave out "that" in your first two sentences. It would make the entry sound more natural. :) 

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