Sea and Me
Have you ever seen sea?
Yet the place I live is a port city, I hadn’t seen sea untile last week.
By the chance to attend the wedding ceremony of my relative,who lives in the islands that stretched into sea , I went to have a look of sea closely in person.
Since several big rives running through the town where bridges acrossing them, it allowed me to have a look of rivers quite often as I drove on bridges.Becuase of that, I supposed that sea might not be far different with rivers.
However, sea shocked me tremendously at the monent I saw it by its wildness. I stood very closly by it, seeing the waves flappered the waves furiously and coutinuously as if it wanted to give me a greeting in a wildly way. And that conviced me the sea has soul which was right under deeper water.
I was unable to move my eyes from sea for a long while. In my heart, I said I will back to see you my friend —Sea.
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Sea and Me
Have you ever seen the sea?Yet the place Although I live is in a port city, I hadn’t seen the sea untile last week.
By the chance, I to attended the wedding ceremony of my relative, who lives in on the islands that stretched into sea , so I went to have a look of at the sea up closely in person.
Since several big rivers running through the town that havewhere bridges acrossing them, it allowed me to have a look of at the rivers quite often as I drove on the bridges. Because of that, I supposed that the sea might not be far very different with from the rivers.
However, the sea shocked me tremendously at from the monent I saw it by its wildness. I stood very close ly by it, seeing the waves flappered the waves furiously and coutinuously as if it wanted to give me a greeting in a wildly way (I'm having difficulty understanding you here. Perhaps you might try "I stood very close by it watching the waves. They ebbed and flowed so furiously and continuously as if they wanted to give me a wild greeting."). And that convinced me that the sea has a soul, which was right under the deeper water.
I was unable to move my eyes from sea for a long while. In my heart I said, 'I will back to see you my friend —Sea'.
Well done! I grew up on the ocean and remember often standing watching the waves. It really is mesmerising!
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Sea and Me
Have you ever seen a sea?Yet Though the place where I live is a port city, I hadn’t seen sea untile last week.
As I had By the chance to attend the wedding ceremony of my relative, who lives in the islands that stretched into the sea , I got a chance went to have a close look of the sea. closely in person.
Since many several big long rivers running through the town with where bridges over acrossing them, it allowed me to have a look of rivers quite often as I drove over on the bridges. Becuase of that, I supposed that sea might not be far different from with rivers.
However, I was sea shocked me tremendously at the monent I saw it by its the wildness of sea. I stood there very by it, seeing watching closely the waves flappered the waves hitting the shore furiously and continuously as if it they wanted to give me a greeting greet me in a wildly. way. And that convinced me the sea has soul which is was right under deeper deep under the water.
I was unable to move my eyes off the from sea for a long while. In my heart, I said, "I will come back to see you my friend - Sea".
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