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Formal Letter. Writing for a hotel where I have found a summer job. Thank you. For the attention of DHI Hotel, I am writing to you regarding the email I received from your company. Thank for the message in which you confirm my place on the vacancy for entertainment assistant. I have studied a Primary Teacher Degree at the university and I have been combined the skills learnt with weekend's jobs. For example, as entertainment assistant in a shopping center, in summer schools and as home tutor. Moreover, the last three months I had the chance of joinned a volunteering in a primary school from United Kingdom which completed my studies succesfully. In the job I have been accepted I hope to continue developing my skills I have studied for working with children. Also, I would like to improve my knowledge about the entertainment assistant position and improve my abilities to communicate in different languages due to the people from other countries visiting the hotel. I wonder if I could ask a couple of questions. Do I need to wear any special clothes when I am starting? or is it the uniform given by the company? I very much look forward to taking part in the job. Regards, Angela.

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Hola! Me llamo James y Ingles es mi idioma nativo.  Voy a tratar de ayudarle a Ud. con esta carta.  Soy  Estadounidense, entonces la gramática seria un poquito diferente que Inglaterra, pero espero que las recomendaciones sean útiles.


Formal Letter. Writing for a hotel where I have found a summer job. Thank you.

For the attention of DHI Hotel,
"'Attention DHI Hotel Director of Human Resources'' or, ''To whom it may concern,"'  would be better choices.

Si sabe el nombre de la persona o el nombre del puesto en cargo de contratación se puede usarlo en el saludo.

I am writing to you regarding the email I received from your company. Thank for the message in which you confirm my place on the vacancy for entertainment assistant       "'I am writing in regards to the most recent email I received from your company.    I would like to thank you for the opportunity and happily confirm in writing, my acceptance of the entertainment assistant position"''

I have studied a Primary Teacher Degree at the university and I have been combined the skills learnt with weekend's jobs. For example, as entertainment assistant in a shopping center, in summer schools and as home tutor. Moreover, the last three months I had the chance of joinned a volunteering in a primary school from United Kingdom which completed my studies succesfully.

"'I am eager to make a positive impact for the company and look forward to using the skills gained while obtaining my Primary Teacher's degree to benefit the hotel and it's clientele."'


In the job I have been accepted I hope to continue developing my skills I have studied for working with children. Also, I would like to improve my knowledge about the entertainment assistant position and improve my abilities to communicate in different languages due to the people from other countries visiting the hotel.

"'I look forward to continuing to grow professionally and personally in this new position, and am excited about the mutually beneficial opportunities working as the entertainment assistant, with DHI Hotel, will bring''



I wonder if I could ask a couple of questions. Do I need to wear any special clothes when I am starting? or is it the uniform given by the company?

"'I look forward to beginning employment on _______________.  If there is any additional information or paperwork I may need, or you need from me,  prior to beginning my employment please let me know.  


Thank you, again, for this opportunity.

Kind Regards,

Angela.


Hope this helps!  Good luck.

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