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对话的概要 两朋友在讨论一个电视访谈节目关于一个歌唱演员。女朋友说那位小伙子把女角色演得比女人还女人,她的朋友首先不相信她的说话。她也说那位歌唱演员不光样子妩媚,连声音都那么柔美。她的朋友相信她,他也想看那个访谈节目。 I hope you can understand it, because it's for one of my university test :) I have to do make a lot of summaries, I hope you can help me, thanks to all of you! ;)

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对话的概要

两朋友在讨论一个电视访谈节目关于一个歌唱演员。女朋友说那位小伙子把女角色演得比女人还女人,她的朋友首先不相信她的说话。她也说那位歌唱演员不光样子妩媚,连声音都那么柔美。她的朋友相信她,他也想看那个访谈节目。

I hope you can understand it, because it's for one of my university test :) I have to do make a lot of summaries, I hope you can help me, thanks to all of you! ;)


两朋友在讨论一个电视访谈节目 , 关于一个唱作俱佳的艺人。 女的朋友说那位小伙子把女角色演得比女人还女人,她的朋友首先不相信她的话。 她也说那位艺人不光样子妩媚,连声音都那么柔美。 她的朋友相信她,他也想看那个访谈节目。 

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说的是李玉刚吧?
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对话的概要

两个朋友在讨论一个关于一个歌唱演员的电视访谈节目关于一个歌唱演员。女朋友(女朋友一般指girlfriend,中文一般说:其中一个姑娘、其中一个女孩)说那位小伙子把女角色演得比女人还女人,她的朋友首先开始并(这个开始不是begin的意思,而是first。)不相信她的说的话。她也还说告诉她的朋友那位歌唱演员不光样子妩媚,连声音都那么柔美。她的朋友相信她很好奇,他也想看那个访谈节目。

I hope you can understand it, because it's for one of my university test :) I have to do make a lot of summaries, I hope you can help me, thanks to all of you! ;)
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谢谢您 ^_^
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我刚看了你写的其它小作文,全都是两个人在讨论什么啊,有意思!不过这篇是写得最好的。

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