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Summarising information. Hey, Francisco! What have you been up to? I hope you are fine. Sorry, I haven't written for so long but I've been very busy working these days. Anyway, I'm writing to tell you about a shocking story I've just read in a newspaper today. Apparently, a boy of 13 years old who lives in Monterrey, managed to steal his father's gun before going to school, and then while his teacher was giving class, took the gun out from his backpack, approached to the teacher and shot her. Luckily, the principal who was walking around was able to disarm him before things went worse. However, it was too late for the teacher who got two shots in the chest dying for bleeding. It seems that the kid was suffering depression and no one had noticed his change of attitude. It's crazy, isn't it? Well, it's getting late and I should get some sleep. I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Take care, Fernando. (I'd be very grateful if you could correct any mistakes I have made so far and give me some feedback, thanks in advance.)

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Summarising information.

Hey, Francisco!

What have you been up to? I hope you are fine. Sorry (no comma) I haven't written for so long, but I've been very busy working these days. Anyway, I'm writing to tell you about a shocking story I've just read in a newspaper today.

Apparently, a boy of 13 years old, who lives in Monterrey, managed to steal his father's gun before going to school, and then, while his teacher was giving class, took the gun out of his backpack, approached to the teacher and shot her. Luckily, the principal who was walking around, was able to disarm him before things got worse. However, it was too late for the teacher, who received two shots in the chest and bled to death. It seems that the kid was suffering depression and no one had noticed his change of attitude. It's crazy, isn't it?

Well, it's getting late and I should get some sleep. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Take care,
Fernando.

(I'd be very grateful if you could correct any mistakes I have made so far and give me some feedback, thanks in advance.)

Excellent work. Your English is very good. - Stephen


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