Please check my email:) Dear Oscar, Thank you for your letter. You have a very interesting project at your school. I think you should choose Odessa city because I was born here and I can tell you that

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Katherine

Please check my email:) Dear Oscar, Thank you for your letter. You have a very interesting project at your school. I think you should choose Odessa city because I was born here and I can tell you that this is the most beautiful city in Ukraine. Odessa is located on the shore of the Black sea. You can see here an amazing sandy beaches and many happy people on it. There is also a lot of beautiful buildings with breathtaking arcitecture and narrow, cozy streets. There are also many nice museums, theatres and cinemas. If you choose my city, you will have a great project for your school. Lots of love Tina

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Please check my email:)

Dear Oscar,
Thank you for your letter. You have a very interesting project in your school. I think you should choose Odessa city because I am born here and I can tell you that this is the most beautiful city in Ukraine.
Odessa is located on the shores of the Black Sea. You can find see here an amazing sandy beaches and many happy beachgoers. people on it. There are also a lot of beautiful buildings with breathtaking architecture and narrow, cozy streets. There are also many nice museums, theatres and cinemas. If you choose my city, you will have a great project for your school. (I am confident that you will be able to organise a great project for your school in my city.)
Lots of love
Tina

Hi Katherine,

I changed your last sentence as it is a conditional sentence. It may give others the impression that if they do not choose your city, they will not have a great project for their school. The new sentence tries to assure the reader again that your city meets their requirements.

Hope this helps.

Cheers,

Lance

Please check my email:)

Dear Oscar,
Thank you for your letter. You have a very interesting project at your school. I think you should choose Odessa city because I was born here there and I can tell you that this is it is the most beautiful city in Ukraine.
Odessa is located on the shore of the Black sea. You can see here an amazing sandy beaches and many happy people on it. There is also a lot of beautiful buildings with breathtaking arcitecture and narrow, cozy streets. There are also many nice museums, theatres and cinemas. If you choose my city, you will have a great project for your school.
Lots of love
Tina

Please check my email:)

Dear Oscar,
Thank you for your letter. You have a very interesting project at your school. I think you should choose Odessa city because I was born here and I can tell you that this is the most beautiful city in Ukraine.
Odessa is located on the shore of the Black Sea. Here you can see here an amazing sandy beaches and many happy people on them. There are also a lot of beautiful buildings with breathtaking architecture and narrow, cozy streets. There are also many nice museums, theatres and cinemas. If you choose my city, you will have a great project for your school.
Lots of love
Tina

*"the city of Odessa" would sound better

Hi Katherine, what is the context of this email? Is it personal? A pen pal?

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