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在雨里打篮球 上个星期我走路回家的时候，开始下大雨。我有一点发冷，所以我跑得快第一个看到的建筑进去了。是个健身房, 有很多穿打篮球的运动衣服。我确实对篮球感兴趣，所以我去跟他们聊天一会。我们聊天的时候，一个张紧张的男人过来了说“你是谁啊？没事！一个选手生病了！你的个子打篮球不大离儿，想打篮球吧！？” 我想个想就点了头。现在，我每个周末跟他们打篮球。 Last week, while I was walking home, it started raining. I was getting cold so I went into the first building I saw. It was a gym and there were a lot of people wearing basketball kit. I'm really interested in basketball so went over to chat to them for a bit. While we were talking, a worried-looking man came over and said "Who are you? Never mind! One of the players is sick! You're about the right build to play basketball, do you want to play?" I thought for a second then nodded my head. Now, I play with them every weekend.

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“不大离儿” ！！ 哈哈，那个人是山东人吧？
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在雨里打篮球

上个星期我走路回家的时候，开始下大雨。我有一点发冷，所以我跑得快，向第一个看到的建筑进去了。是个健身房, 有很多穿打篮球的运动衣服有很多穿运动服打篮球的。我确实对篮球感兴趣，所以我去跟他们聊天一会。我们聊天的时候，一个张紧张的男人走过来了说“你是谁啊？没事！一个选手生病了！你的个子打篮球不大离儿，想打篮球吧！？” 我想个了想就点了头。现在，我每个周末跟他们打篮球。

Last week, while I was walking home, it started raining. I was getting cold so I went into the first building I saw. It was a gym and there were a lot of people wearing basketball kit. I'm really interested in basketball so went over to chat to them for a bit. While we were talking, a worried-looking man came over and said "Who are you? Never mind! One of the players is sick! You're about the right build to play basketball, do you want to play?" I thought for a second then nodded my head. Now, I play with them every weekend.
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好棒耶，顺便我也可以学习英语呢。
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在雨里打篮球   题目不合适，英文是playing basketball in rain, 你并没有在雨中打篮球，你只是因为雨结识了一群打篮球的人。

上个星期我走路回家的时候，开始下起了大雨。我有一点发冷开始感觉到有点冷，所以于是我跑得快第一个看到的建筑进去了到第一眼就看到的（离我最近的）建筑里去（避雨）。原来那是个健身房运动馆, 里面有很多穿打篮球的运动衣服的人。我确实对篮球很感兴趣，所以我走过去跟他们聊天一会了一会儿。我们聊天的时候，一个张神情紧张的男人过来了说“你是谁啊？没事不管了！一个选手生病了！你的个子体格看起来适合打篮球不大离儿，你想打篮球吧玩吗！？” 我想个了想就点了点头。现在，我每个周末都跟他们打篮球。

Last week, while I was walking home, it started raining. I was getting cold so I went into the first building I saw. It was a gym and there were a lot of people wearing basketball kit. I'm really interested in basketball so went over to chat to them for a bit. While we were talking, a worried-looking man came over and said "Who are you? Never mind! One of the players is sick! You're about the right build to play basketball, do you want to play?" I thought for a second then nodded my head. Now, I play with them every weekend.

Basketball Kit  篮球运动服

Gym 健身房，但一般指的是fitness room

Really 可以表示“确实”，也有“很，非常”的意思 

 

 

 

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在雨里打篮球

上个星期我走路回家的时候，开始下大雨。我有一点发冷，所以我跑得快第一个看到的建筑进去了（我看到的一栋大厦，飞快地跑进去了）。（这是）是个健身房, 有很多穿打篮球的运动衣服（有很多人穿着篮球服）。我确实对篮球感兴趣，所以我去跟他们聊天一会（所以我和他们聊了一会）。我们聊天的时候，一个张紧张的男人过来了说（一个面带愁容的男人走过来对我说）“你是谁啊？没事！（没关系）一个选手生病了！你的个子打篮球不大离儿（你这么高的个子，很适合打篮球），（你）想打篮球吧（吗）！？” 我想个（了）想就点了头。现在，我每个周末（都）跟他们打篮球。

Last week, while I was walking home, it started raining. I was getting cold so I went into the first building I saw. It was a gym and there were a lot of people wearing basketball kit. I'm really interested in basketball so went over to chat to them for a bit. While we were talking, a worried-looking man came over and said "Who are you? Never mind! One of the players is sick! You're about the right build to play basketball, do you want to play?" I thought for a second then nodded my head. Now, I play with them every weekend.


I will use the words（） to say it.

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