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Earth day ( correct my writing ) please ! the last month we celebrate the earth day, maybe for the majority is a common day, but that is not true. In my opinion is time to make conscious about what is happening with the environment right now . The global media temperature rise up 1 degree celsius. We have had all hints about the global warning.Now it's happening in the poles. The Antarctic was melting too fast since 40 decades ago.The overpopulation, the use of the technology have contributed with the CO2 emission. It is a fact the climate have changed. The sea temperature has risen up too. It has caused earthquake,flood, hurricanes, storms and others natural disasters. For this emergency United Nations has proposed the 17 sustainable development goals.This is slight help to pressure the huge companies and the countries to fight for the global warming. Also this is happening since the revolution Industry era to the technology era. The humans have destroyed the planet and exploded many resources to get fossil fuels.this exploration has caused the destruction and the extinction of many species of plants and animals. Peoples didn't realize some of those species contribute to the balance of the planet, like the plants produce oxygen, clean the atmosphere, be the food for another species,etc. the all governments and everyone have the compromise to reduce the CO2 emission, do recycling, stop to waste energy and basic resources. We have remember The Earth is our only home to live.

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Last month we celebrated the Earth day. Maybe for most it is a common day, but that is not right. In my opinion, it is time to become conscious about what is happening with the environment right now . The global medium temperature rise has risen up to 1 degree Celsius. We have had all hints about the global warning.Now it's happening in the poles. The Antarctic has been melting too fast in the past 40 decades ago.The overpopulation, the use of the technology have contributed to the CO2 emission. It is a fact the climate have changed. The sea temperature has risen up too. It has caused earthquakes,floods, hurricanes, storms and others natural disasters. For this emergency the United Nations has proposed the 17 sustainable development goals.This is a slight help to pressure the huge companies and the countries to fight for the global warming. Also, this has been happening since the revolution transition from  Industry era to the technology era. Humans  have been destroying the planet and exploded exploiting many resources to get fossil fuels.this exploitation  has caused the destruction and the extinction of many species of plants and animals. Peoples didn't realize some of those species contribute to the balance of the ecosystem as  plants produce oxygen, clean the atmosphere, are the food for another species,etc. It is the duty of all governments and citizens  to reduce the CO2 emission, do recycling, stop wasting energy and basic resources. We have to remember The Earth is our only home to live.

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