Sweetly cherries
Today we drove to Beizhai village to pick cherries with my elder sister and little cute nephew.What I have to say is that the way to the top of hill is so steep,and many cars came in stream.
Excitedly,the view of the hill was so beautiful ,and we were so lucky to breathe the fresh air away from the city!So there's no reason to refuse the gift of nature,right?
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Hi there! Here are my corrections to your text. I hope this helps, let me know if you have any questions about them!
Sweetly ('sweetly' is an adverb with describes 'how' you do something, e.g. 'He smiled sweetly'. Here you need to use sweet as an adjective to describe the taste of the cherries)cherries
Today we drove to Beizhai village to pick cherries with my elder sister and cute (adjectives of quality or opinion usually come before adjectives of size) little cute nephew. (always a space after a full-stop)What I have to say is that the way road / path to the top of the hill was (better to use the past tense here because your story is in the past) is so steep, (always a space after a comma)and many cars streamed past us. came in stream.Excitedly The view from (must be 'view from' because you are looking away from the hill. If you are looking at the hill you would say 'view of the hill')of the hill was so beautiful, which was very exciting, and we were so lucky to breathe in the fresh air far away from the city! (always a space after an exclamation mark)So there's no reason to refuse the gift of nature, right?
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