Like a River 川のように
People say that life is like a river. Some are long and others are short. Some are wide and others are narrow.
One day rain waters the river the life with beautiful quiet drops
Another day rain destroys the river with tremendous fierce power.
My river,
I was narrow and running hurry. I seemed to be very energetic and ambitious. Sometimes the fish inside might have been hurt with strong stream and no one came by for water.
One day I was going to be dried, looked up the sky and cried asking for water.
Next day it didn’t rain either. A small poor bird came from somewhere and asked for water even though I was going to die. I endured and stayed there to help the life of the small bird. He became cheerful and flied away. I was almost faint and looking at his beautiful back. It was as if I had a dream.
Three days later, finally it rained.
It watered my thirst and washed away my arrogance, tiring and sadness.
The pure drops wrapped around me softly and tenderly.
I got my life back and heard the small bird's whispering in my ear.
"To live is to give your love out and let others in."
I’d like to be a river at which a small bird or a big eagle would take a rest, ask for some water and fly away and come back again if necessary.
Where there is love, I’ll be there.
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Like a River 川のように
People say that life is like a river. Some are long and others are short. Some are wide and others are narrow.One day, rain waters the river the life with beautiful, quiet drops.
Another day, rain destroys the river with tremendously fierce power.
My river,
I was narrow and running hastily . I seemed to be very energetic and ambitious. Sometimes the fish inside might have been hurt with by the strong stream and no one came by for water.
One day I was going to be became dry dried, I looked up to the sky and cried, asking for water.
Next day it didn’t rain either. A small poor bird came from somewhere and asked for water even though I was going to die. I endured and stayed there to help the life of the small bird. He became cheerful and flew flied away. I was feeling almost faint and looking at his beautiful back, it was as if I was had a dreaming.
Three days later, finally it rained it finally rained!
I got my life back.
I learned the most important thing.
To live is to give your love and to let it in.
I’d like to be a river at which a small bird or a big eagle would take a rest, ask for some water and fly away and come back again if it’s necessary.
I’ll be there for you.
Wow! This is really beautiful... is this original? Very insightful, poetic and well written too.
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Hi Tevin, Thank you for your comment. I'm very glad you like my essay. so, would you like my Japanese translation of this post? or some others?
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Have you ever done a piece of Writing with blended Japanese? If so can you send that to me, I'd love to read what you wrote.
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Thank you, Nikky. I added some sentences to make it better after your correction. I hope you love it.
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