The Business
Mr.Mistuhashi thought that whether person was good at business or not depended on if customers were willing to pay for it. Of course the shoe shiner flattered him but he had an observant eye and found out what to do. Then, he got his work done efficiently and pleasantly. Mr.Mistuhashi was glad to pay. He keenly thought person who did business had to have the customers pay money pleasantly.
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The Business
Mr.Mistuhashi thought that whether a person was is good at business or not dependeds on how if customers were willing to pay for it. Of course, the shoe shiner flattered him but he also had an observant eye and found out (cannot use "found out" here, it's meaning is more about smthng unexpected or when hidden is exposed) knew what to do. Then, he got his work done efficiently and pleasantly. Mr.Mistuhashi was glad to pay. He keenly thought person who did business had to have the customers pay money pleasantly. (didn't understand the last sentence. is it something like "He thought a good businessman takes good care of his customers so they pay willingly" ?)a person who did business = a businessman
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Last sentence might be confusing. I wanted to say "businessman have to get customers to pay money pleasantly."
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