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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writting to complain about programs on TV-channel "Miaa".
Firstly, once I heard lying information on NEWS. It is awful! I trust that you will give the matter serious consideration and that won't be repeated. In addiction a channel must do updating of design. If I were you I would add the brightness to my channel. Secondly, advertisements must be less than now and more often show the cartoons.
However, your channel has positive sides. For example you have a wonderful show "Useful advices" and kid's shows. Also on your channel very exact weather forecast. It is difficult not to notice that presenteres are very kind and polite. It is a large plus for channel!
I hope you will correct your mistakes.
Yours faithfully, Marya.
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Dear Sir/Madam,I am going to write complaints about programs on TV-channel "Miaa".
Firstly, once I heard lying information on NEWS. It is awful! I trust that they give the matter serious consideration and that won't be repeated. In addition, a channel must do updating of design. If I were you, I would add the brightness to my channel. Secondly, advertisements must be less than now and more often show the cartoons.
However, your channel has positive sides. For example, you have a wonderful show for providing "Useful pieces of advice" and kid's shows. Also on your channel, there is exact information about the weather forecast. It is difficult not to notice that presenters are very kind and polite. It is a large plus for channel!
I hope you will correct your mistakes.
Yours faithfully, Marya.
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