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please correct thank you Today, I saw a movie called four weddings and one funeral. I see myself reflected on the leaders, Charles. Always want to pursue something or someone beyond my arm, and meanwhile fear to make promise to other people. Because it would take the rest of my life to pay for the oath, which is probably not sweet anymore. Don’t dare to paint a special glorious picture about the future, but can’t accept that mine life is just as same usual as the other guys’ of whom you may not think highly. It also occurs to me that whether soulmates and lunatic true love do exist in the world? I believe so. I mean, the one who finally becomes our husband or wife, or even just some partners who accompany you for a short time, must be definitely sent by god. Or we may lose or even can’t notice the clue to find them out in the populous mass. Just as Charles nearly lose Carrier. I want to end the daily essay by a sentence in this movie. Love is the answer, and you know that for sure. Not just for romantic relationships, but still for every usual thing I do in the daily life. The life may need some grouse to hold on, and the essential nature of live may be a tragedy, but if we can feel love and luck from time to time, and sow the happy time into a clothes, then it’s enough. Thanks again for reading and correcting my essay , from the deeply buttom of my heart . It do help me a lot.

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Today, I saw a movie called Four Weddings and one Funeral.
I see myself reflected on in the leaders, Charles.
(Who, I?)Always want to pursue something or someone beyond my arm (do you mean "out of reach"?, and meanwhile, I fear to make promises to other people. Because it would take the rest of my life to pay for the oath, which is probably not sweet anymore.
I Don’t dare to paint a special glorious picture about the future, but I can’t accept that mine my life is just as same usual (normal) as the other guy's’ of whom you may not think highly.
It also occurs to me that whether soulmates and lunatics and true love do exist in the world?
I believe so. I mean, the one who finally becomes our husband or wife, or even just some partners who accompany you us for a short time, must definitely be sent by God. Or we may lose or even can’t not (even) notice the clue to find them out in the populous mass. Just as Charles nearly loses Carrie.
I want to end the daily essay by  with a sentence in from this movie.
Love is the answer, and you know that for sure.
Not just for romantic relationships, but still for every usual thing I do in (the) daily life.
The life may need some grouse (?)to hold on, and the essential nature of live  life may be a tragedy, but if we can feel love and luck from time to time, and sow  sew the happy time into a clothes, then it’s enough.

Thanks again for reading and correcting my essay , from the deeply buttom  bottom of my heart .
It does help me a lot.

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Today, I saw a movie called Four Weddings and a Funeral.

I see myself reflected in the leader, Charles. 

I always want to pursue something or someone beyond my reach; meanwhile, I fear making promises to other people. Because it would take the rest of my life to pay for the oath, which is probably not sweet anymore. (Not sure what you are trying to say here)
I don't dare to paint a special glorious picture about the future, but I can’t accept that my life is just the same as the other guys' of whom you may not think highly.
It also occurs to me to ask whether soulmates and crazy true love do exist in the world?
I believe so. I mean, the one who finally becomes our husband or wife, or even just some partners who accompany us for a short time, must be definitely sent by God. Or we may lose or even not  notice the clue to find them in the crowd. Just as Charles nearly loses Carrie.
I want to end the daily essay by quoting a sentence from this movie.
Love is the answer, and you know that for sure.
Not just for romantic relationships, but  also for every normal thing I do in daily life.
Life may need some grouse ? to hold on, and the essential nature of life may be a tragedy, but if we can feel love and luck from time to time, and sew the happy time into clothes, then it’s enough.

Thanks again for reading and correcting my essay , from the bottom of my heart .
It helps me a lot.

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