JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON May.13th (Writing about a cup of coffee)
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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON 13th.May
What do you drink for every breakfast? a glass of Orange juice? Milk? or a cup of tea?? I feel that American people drink a glass of milk for it, well come to think of it, While I had lived at one canadian family as a home-staying, they usually had served me a cap of milk everymorning with a peace of bread. So, that's why I imagine that so. But In japan, I feel most japanese drink a cup of coffee, at least to me I drink it every morning, also my father do so. Doing this every morninig is really beneficial for people, especially Japanese people since we would take much caffaene. Japanese is exactlly early bird, they have to be up at 5:30AM and then they head to a station for their own workoffice in a hurry...concidentally, I don't think that it's good scene that Japanese do so in harry to get the office on time. I wanted society of Japan to let people pass their life more comfotably....Oh, it's off the topic. Yeah, like this because, they prefer drink a cup of coffee to milk or orange juice. Caffaine often make us keep to be awake for the work time. Who knows, we couldn't get scolded from our boss with taking much caffaine.
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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON May.13th (Writing about a cup of coffee) What do you drink for breakfast? A glass of orange juice? Or a cup of tea?? I feel that American people drink a glass of milk though, come to think of it, when I lived with one Canadian family as a home-stay, they usually served me a cup of milk every morning with a piece of bread. So, that's why I imagine that this is so. But in Japan, I feel that most Japanese drink a cup of coffee. At least for me, I drink it every morning, and so does my father. Doing this every morning is really beneficial for people, especially Japanese people since we take in more caffeine. The japanese are early birds, they have to be up at 5:30AM and then they head to a station to get to their office in a hurry....concidentally, I don't think that it's good that Japanese do so in hurry to get to the office on time. I want the sociery of Japan to let people live their lives more comfortably...but I'm getting off topic. Yeah, they prefer to drink a cup of coffee instead of milk or orange juice. Caffeine often makes us stay awake for the work time. Who knows, we couldn't get scolded from our boss with drinking much coffeine.
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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON May.13th (Writing about a cup of coffee)
I would like someone to correct my diary. Could you do that for me, please?JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON 13th.May
What do you drink for every breakfast? A glass of orange juice? Milk? Or a cup of tea?? I feel that American people drink a glass of milk for it, well though come to think of it, While when I had lived at with one Canadian family as a home-stay, they usually had served me a cup of milk every morning with a piece of bread. So, that's why I imagine that this is so. But In japan, I feel that most Japanese drink a cup of coffee. At least for me, I drink it every morning, and so does my father do so. Doing this every morninig is really beneficial for people, especially Japanese people since we would take in much (more?) caffeine. The Japanese are exactlly early birds, they have to be up at 5:30AM and then they head to a station to get to their own office in a hurry...concidentally, I don't think that it's good that Japanese do so in hurry to get to the office on time. I want the society of Japan to let people live their lives more comfortably....but I'm getting it's off the topic. Yeah, like this because, they prefer to drink a cup of coffee instead of milk or orange juice. Caffeine often makes us stay keep to be awake for the work time. Who knows, we couldn't get scolded from our boss with drinking much caffeine.
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