My relationship with art
Hello everybody, today I'm going to talk about my passion for art!
I have always appreciated art in general, for example, at school, but I really undestood what it means to me just few years ago. In fact, when I went to Univesity, I began to have the possibility to travel more. Now I'm living not far from Florence, and everytime I can catch the train, I do it. Florence has an huge number of museums, and it is impossible not to fall in love with the art the city offers. For example, I visited The Uffizi museum more than once, and everytime I see a painting, I just adore it. It's amazing. No matter how many people, how many noise. It' s just what the painter wants to communicate and you. Art is the way you realize lots of thing with no talking needs.
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My relationship with art
Hello everybody, today I'm going to talk about my passion for art!I have always appreciated art in general, for example, at school, but I really understood what it means to me just few years ago. In fact, when I went to University, I began to have the possibility to travel more. Now I'm living not far from Florence, and every time I can catch the train to the city, I do it. Florence has an huge number of museums, and it is impossible not to fall in love with the art the city offers. For example, I visited The Uffizi museum more than once, and every time I see a painting, I just adore it. It's amazing. No matter how many people, how much noise; it's just what the painter wants to communicate, and you. Art is the way you realize lots of things with no talking necessary.
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Hi Francesca,
This is a really lovely entry! Well-written, and your passion for art really comes through. I only changed a few things to help with clarity.
Let me know if you have any questions!
Best,
Julie
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My Relationship with Art
Hello everybody,Today I'm going to talk about my passion for art! I have always appreciated art in general, for example, at school. However, I really understood what it means to me just a few years ago. When I attended my university, I had the option to travel. Now I'm living not far from Florence, and every time I can catch the train, I do it. Florence has a huge number of museums, and it is impossible not to fall in love with the art the city offers. For example, I visited The Uffizi museum more than once, and every time I see a painting, I just adore it. It's amazing no matter how many people or how much noise there is. It's just about what the painter wants to communicate and you. Art is the way you realize lots of things with no talking needed.
-Capitalize words in a title.
-"I do it" is unclear. Do you sketch, do you paint or do you take photos? Do you admire the art? Be clear :)
-Do not use the article "an" when the noun or adjective starts with a consonant. For example, these are acceptable uses:
a cat
an apple
a house
-I am unsure if "museum" is part of the name of "The Uffizi" but if it is, capitalize it.
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