A water
I had 2 liters of water yesterday.
I heard that is good if I drink a lot of water every day.
I am indeed in good health by drink a lot of water.
However, I become to go to the restroom immediately.
In case of the pocari, I will not go to the restroom frequently.
However, the pocari has a lot of sugar.
So, I would like to drink a lot of water this summer.
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A Water
I had 2 liters (British English - litres) of water yesterday.I heard that it is good to drink a lot of water every day.
I am indeed in good health by drinking a lot of water.
However, I
In the case of
However,
So, I would like to drink a lot of water this summer.
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Good job! The sentences seem a little bit disparate, so make sure next time you try and write a paragraph that links better. Do you prefer pocari or water? :D
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A water
I had 2 liters of water yesterday.I heard that it is good if I drink a lot of water every day.
I am indeed in good health by drinking a lot of water.
However, I
In the case of
However,
So, I would like to drink a lot of water this summer.
+Pocari is delicious!
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