JUST A DIARY ON May.12th (Writing about a bycycle) I would like someone to correct my diary. Could you do that for me, please? JUST A DIARY ON May.12th Here is one example, If when I would go somew

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JUST A DIARY ON May.12th (Writing about a bycycle) I would like someone to correct my diary. Could you do that for me, please? JUST A DIARY ON May.12th Here is one example, If when I would go somewhere, I prefered riding a bycycle to walking to get there. I might feel like that by walking is not very comfortable for me rather than "I don't like" since I couldn't feel comfortbale breeze. That's why I choose riding bycicle as the way of going somewhere. While I was junior high school student, I used to go anyplaces by my bycicle without a purpose. Actually, this doing really excited me, well I would be able to find out some nice places where only I would know. Now, I often drive a car, and if someday I come up with any idea of places that I want to go, and it is so fer, then I would be happy to ride on car becasue this way is easier than a bycycle to get there. But sometime, I feel I want to ride on it again, and I want to do something ridiculous again, like going along a railroad forever. But guessig it wouldn't come true in the future, you know I don't have much time a lot...anyone, give much time, please lol

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JUST A DIARY ON 12th May.12th (Writing about a bicycle)

I would like someone to correct my diary. Could you do that for me, please?

JUST A DIARY ON 12th May.12th

Here is one example, If when I would go somewhere, I prefered riding a bycycle to walking to get there. I might feel like that by walking is not very comfortable for me rather than "I don't like" since I couldn't feel comfortbale breeze. That's why I choose riding bycicle as the way of going somewhere. While I was junior high school student, I used to go anyplaces by my bycicle without a purpose. Actually, this doing really excited me, well I would be able to find out some nice places where only I would know. Now, I often drive a car, and if someday I come up with any idea of places that I want to go, and it is so fer, then I would be happy to ride on car becasue this way is easier than a bycycle to get there. But sometime, I feel I want to ride on it again, and I want to do something ridiculous again, like going along a railroad forever. But guessig it wouldn't come true in the future, you know I don't have much time a lot...anyone, give much time, please lol

I prefer riding a bicycle to walking to get where I am going. Walking is not that pleasant for me because I don't feel the breeze, that's why I chose cycling instead. While I was a junior high school student, I used to cycle all over the place. I was excited about doing this as I would be able to find some nice places that only I would know about. Now, I often drive and if I decide to go somewhere far, then I am happy to drive because it's easier than cycling. However, sometimes I feel like riding my bike again and I want to do something ridiculous again, like riding along a railroad forever. But I guess that will never happen because I don't have a lot of time. Can anyone give me some time?

JUST A DIARY ON 12 May.12th (Writing about a byicycle)

I would like someone to correct my diary. Could you do that for me, please?

JUST A DIARY ON 12 May (English tend to spell out the actual number of a day before month not after)

Here is an example, If when I would go somewhere, I prefered riding a byicycle to walking to get there. I might feel like that by walking is not very comfortable for me rather than "I don't like it" since I can't feel comfortbaable breeze. That's why I choose riding byicicle as thea way of going somewhere. While I was a junior high school student, I used to go any places by my byicicle without a purpose. Actually, I was really excited doing this, well, I would be able to find out some nice places wherethat only I would know. Now, I often drive a car, and if someday I come up with any idea of a places that I want to go, and it would be so fear, then I would be happy to ridego there onby car becasuause this way is easier than by a byicycle to get there. But sometimes, I feel I want to ride on it again, and I want to do something ridiculous again, like going along a railroad forever. But guessing it wouldn't come true in the future, you know I don't have much time a lot... anyone, give muchme more time time, please lol

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON May 12th (Writing about a bicycle)

I would like someone to correct my diary. Could you do that for me, please?

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON May 12th

Here is one example: If when I was to go somewhere, I would prefer riding a bycycle than to walking to get there. I might feel like that because walking is not very comfortable for me rather than "I don't like it" as I couldn't feel a comfortable breeze. That's why I choose riding bycicle as the way of going somewhere. While I was a junior high school student, I used to go everywhere by my bycicle without any sense of purpose. Actually, this doing really excited me, well, I would be able to find out some nice places where only I would know. Now, I often drive a car, and if someday I come up with any idea of places that I want to go to, and it is very far then I would be happy to ride in a car becasue this way it is easier than a bycycle to get there. But sometimes, I feel I want to ride on it again, and I want to do something ridiculous again, like going along a railway road forever. But wishing it wouldn't make it come true in the future, you know, I don't have much time anymore...anyone, give me more time, please lol

Well done Taichi! An interesting diary entry to read!

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON May.12th (Writing about a bicycle) Here is one example, If when I was to go somewhere, I would prefer riding a bicycle than to walking to get there. I might feel like that by walking is not very comfortable for me rather than "I don't like it" since I can't feel a comfortable breeze. That's why I choose riding bicycle as the way of going somewhere. While I was a junior high school student, I used to go everywhere by my bicycle without any sense of purpose. Actually, this doing really excited me, well, I would be able to find out some nice places where only I would know. Now, I often drive a car, and if someday I come up with any idea of places that I want to go to, and it is very far then i would be happy to ride in a car because this way it is easier than a bicycle to get there. But sometimes, I feel I want to ride on it again, and I want to do something ridiculous again, like going along a railway forever. But wishing it wouldn't make it come true in the future, you know, I don't have much time anymore...anyone, give me more time, please lol

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