昨天我生日
我昨天庆祝我生日。 我是三十岁。
在早上 我和我朋友们在餐馆去吃早餐了。大家吃了full english breakfast。
然后我们去集镇而且我们去啤酒吧。 我喝两杯啤酒了
Yesterday i celebrated my birthday. I am 30 years old.
In the morning me and my friends ate breakfast at a small restaurant. Everyone ate a Full English Breakfast.
Afterwards we went into town and went to a pub. I drank two pints of beer.
(Apologies for the short blunt nature of this entry. I'm still struggling to express myself in depth in chinese .Thanks for taking a look .)
Chris
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昨天是我生日。
我昨天我庆祝我的生日。今年 我是三十岁。在早上 我和我朋友们去餐馆吃早餐了。大家吃了full english breakfast（全英式的早餐）。
然后我们去集镇而且我们去了啤酒吧。 我喝了两杯啤酒了。
Yesterday i celebrated my birthday. I am 30 years old.
In the morning me and my friends ate breakfast at a small restaurant. Everyone ate a Full English Breakfast.
Afterwards we went into town and went to a pub. I drank two pints of beer.
(Apologies for the short blunt nature of this entry. I'm still struggling to express myself in depth in chinese .Thanks for taking a look .)
Chris
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昨天是我生日
昨天我庆祝了我30岁的生日。
在早上，我和我朋友们在一家小餐馆吃了早餐。我们点（order）的是全英式早餐。
然后我们去了镇上的一家酒吧。 我喝了两大瓶啤酒。
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昨天我生日
我昨天庆祝了我三十岁生日。 我是三十岁。在早上， 我和我朋友们在餐馆去吃早餐了。大家吃了full english breakfast。
然后我们去了集镇而且我们去上的啤酒吧。 我喝了两杯啤酒了。
Yesterday i celebrated my birthday. I am 30 years old.
In the morning me and my friends ate breakfast at a small restaurant. Everyone ate a Full English Breakfast.
Afterwards we went into town and went to a pub. I drank two pints of beer.
(Apologies for the short blunt nature of this entry. I'm still struggling to express myself in depth in chinese .Thanks for taking a look .)
Chris
我昨天庆祝了三十岁生日。
早上， 我和朋友们在餐馆吃早餐。大家吃了full English breakfast。
然后我们去了集镇上的啤酒吧。 我喝了两杯啤酒。
PS: Very nice Chinese.
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昨天我生日
昨天我庆祝了我的生日，我三十岁了。早上，我和我的朋友们去一家小餐馆吃了早餐，大家吃的英式早餐。然后，我们去了镇里的一家酒吧， 我喝了两品脱啤酒。
Yesterday i celebrated my birthday. I am 30 years old.
In the morning me and my friends ate breakfast at a small restaurant. Everyone ate a Full English Breakfast.
Afterwards we went into town and went to a pub. I drank two pints of beer.
(Apologies for the short blunt nature of this entry. I'm still struggling to express myself in depth in chinese .Thanks for taking a look .)
Chris
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