A letter to my friend Dear Miya, Hi, Miya. How have you been going? I am going to move to new house next month. There are some furnitures that I won't be able to take with me. The new house is s

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Elaine

A letter to my friend Dear Miya, Hi, Miya. How have you been going? I am going to move to new house next month. There are some furnitures that I won't be able to take with me. The new house is smaller. So I decided to sell some furnitures out. There is a wooden dinning table for six people. It is brown. I remember that you said you wanna buy this kind classic dinning table with special pattern, right? By the way, there are six matching chairs with the table. Please let me know if you interested on it.I will stay at home this weekend. It will be good that if you come and have a look. Love, Elaine

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A letter to my friend

Dear Miya,
Hi, Miya. How have you been doing? I am going to move to a new house next month. There is some furniture that I won't be able to take with me. The new house is smaller. So I decided to sell some furniture before I go.
There is a wooden dining table for six people. It is brown. I remember that you said you would wanna buy this kind of classic dining table with such a special pattern, right? By the way, there are six matching chairs with the table.
Please let me know if you are interested in it. I will be at home this weekend. It would be good that if you came and had a look.
Love,
Elaine

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Hi Elaine,

This is a lovely letter. I've changed just a few things -- I used 'would' in places where you used 'will' because you were talking about the hypothetical future, and changed 'furnitures' to 'furniture'. It's an uncountable noun, so it's always just 'furniture'. You can say 'I have many pieces of furniture' if you want to count them, otherwise it's 'I have a lot of furniture' or 'I don't have much furniture.'

I hope that helps! Let me know if you have any questions.

Best,

Julie

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