Inform about house facility
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Hi John,
I"m now living in 123 Wellington ave. I would like to inform you that we have a problem about water when we have a bath. Water completely stopped flow during I have a bath many times this week. It's a problem with bathroom both downstair and upstair. So, I think the problem it's not from a shower, but it's a water system. This problem occurred, especially, when another people used water at the same time. For example, washing machine or washing dishes or have a bath. Moreover, cold tap water flows not strong as usual. Could you please send someone to solve this problem.Many thanks.
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Hi John,
I'm now living in live at 123 Wellington Ave. I would like to inform you that we I have a water problem about water when we have a bath. The water has stopped flowing completely stopped flow during I have a my bath**[**In spoken English, bath means you are sitting in the tub] shower many times this week. It's a The problem with bathroom is both downstairs and upstairs. So, I think the problem it's not from a shower, but it's is a water system problem. This problem occurs especially, when another other people are using used water at the same time, for example, when the washing machine is running or when washing dishes or have a bath. Moreover, cold tap water flows is not as strong as usual. Could you please send someone to resolve this problem? Many thanks.
I'm now living in live at 123 Wellington Ave. I would like to inform you that we I have a water problem about water when we have a bath. The water has stopped flowing completely stopped flow during I have a my bath**[**In spoken English, bath means you are sitting in the tub] shower many times this week. It's a The problem with bathroom is both downstairs and upstairs. So, I think the problem it's not from a shower, but it's is a water system problem. This problem occurs especially, when another other people are using used water at the same time, for example, when the washing machine is running or when washing dishes or have a bath. Moreover, cold tap water flows is not as strong as usual. Could you please send someone to resolve this problem? Many thanks.
Hi John,
I live at 123 Wellington Ave. and I would like to inform you that I have a water problem. The water has stopped flowing completely during my shower many times this week. The problem with bathroom is both downstairs and upstairs. So, I think the problem is a water system problem. This problem occurs when other people are using water at the same time, for example, when the washing machine is running or when washing dishes. Moreover, cold tap water flow is not as strong as usual. Could you please send someone to resolve this problem? Many thanks.
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