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Trevi Fountain Hello, Today I just have read in the news that Rome is thinking about rejecting visits to the Trevi Fountain. This is because there is huge people visit it, and there are persons having a bad behaviour. In fact, last month, two people had a bath in the Fountain. I was very surprised to read that there are persons who have thrown their denture! So, I don´t find strange that Rome wants to limit and control the access to the Fountain. I had never been in Rome, but I hope that I will go and visit this marvellous city in my next future. Thanks!

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Trevi Fountain

Hello,
Today I have just read in the news that Rome is thinking about rejecting visits to the Trevi Fountain. This is because there is huge people visiting it and there are persons having a bad behaviour. In fact, last month, two people had a bath in the Fountain. I was very surprised to read that there are persons who have thrown their denture! So, I don´t find it strange that Rome wants to limit and control the access to the Fountain.
I had never been in Rome, but I hope that I will go and visit this marvelous city in my next future.

Thanks!


Very Interesting and perfect..you have very good skills ..There are only few Mistakes just little not to be worried about..I have just make these mistaken words in bold and underlined 

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Trevi Fountain

Hello,
Today I just have read in the news that Rome is thinking about rejecting visits to the Trevi Fountain. This is because there is huge are a lot of people who visit it, and some exhibit ungracious behaviour. there are persons having a bad behaviour. In fact, last month, two people had a bath in the fountain (When you mentioned the name of the fountain, you capitalise the first letter (Trevi Fountain). Now, you are referring the same fountain without its full name. You can use "the fountain".). I was very surprised to read that there are people persons (There is nothing wrong with the use of "persons". However, it is more common to use "people".) have thrown their dentures into the fountain! So, I don´t find it strange that Rome wants to limit and control access to the fountain.
I had never been to Rome, but I hope that I can will (If you use "will", it means you will definitely visit. Since you are "hoping" to go, we use "can" to indicate your ability to go.) go and visit this marvellous city in the my next future.

Thanks!

Hi Araceli, 

Hope this helps! 

Cheers,

Lance 

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