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My hope filed My hope filed is Programming Language. Because I like Programming Language such as Python and java. They look so boring, but they are really interesting. When I started Python, I could’t stop it. A programming language is a formal language that specifies a set of instructions that can be used to produce various kinds of output. It is a language for shove around computer. It is the basis for creating software. Programming language has many types such as Java, C, C++ and Python. I plan to go to Korea Digital Media High School next year. So I manage academic record and decide to get certificate of data processing. And I will study math and English hard, because math and English are important for Programming language.

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My hope filed

My hope filed (I don't know what you mean by "filed". If you could explain to me, I can help you say it better!) is Programming Language, because I like Programming Languages such as Python and Java.
They look so boring, but they are really interesting.
When I started Python, I couldn’t stop it.
A programming language is a formal language that specifies a set of instructions that can be used to produce various kinds of output. It is a language for shove (not exactly sure what you mean by "shove") around computer. It is the basis for creating software. Programming language has many types such as Java, C, C++ and Python. (It would sound more natural to say "There are many types of programming languages such as Java, C, C++ and Python.)
I plan to go to Korea Digital Media High School next year. So I manage (I am not exactly sure what you mean by "manage") academic record and decide to get certificate of data processing. And I will study math and English hard, because math and English are important for Programming language.
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My hope filed The Field I Hope to Enter

My hope filed The field I want to go into is Programming Language. (이쪽으로 들어가고싶다)
Bbecause I like Programming Language such as Python and java. (한국어로는 문장 "왜냐하면,~~~~"로 시작할수있는데 영어는 한상 붙어야합니다)
They look so boring, but they are really interesting.
When I started Python, I could’t stop it.
A programming language is a formal language that specifies a set of instructions that can be used to produce various kinds of output. It is a language for shove around computer. It is the basis for creating software. Programming language has many types such as Java, C, C++ and Python.
I plan to go to Korea Digital Media High School next year. So I manage academic record (성적을 유지했다라면- i kept my grades up) and decided (결정은 과거나 미래)to get certificate of data processing. And Also, (문장 '그리고'로 시작할려면 And 보다 Also, 로 시작하는게 나압니다) I will study math and English hard, because math and English are important for Programming language.

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You did a great job on this piece! However, there were a couple of things I didn't quite understand the way you used them. If you explain what you meant, I can help you correct it some more.

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