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I have a new cat Hello! My name is Leyre and I want to tell you about my new cat. She was named Kaleshi by my girlfriend but I prefer to call she Bowie because she have a different colour in her eyes. One is ligthly blue and the other is yellow like the ambar, and her hair is perfectly white. She is so beautifull and sweet. When she have, more or less, one year was abandoned in the streets, but now have a new family and lot of love. My other cat is very jelous about she, but bit by bit the situation between they are better. I hope they'll be the best friends.

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I have a new cat

Hello! My name is Leyre and I want to tell you about my new cat. She was named Kaleshi by my girlfriend but I prefer to call her Bowie because she has a different colour in her eyes. One is slightly blue and the other is yellow like amber, and her hair is perfectly white. She is so beautiful and sweet.
When she was more or less a year old, she was abandoned in the streets, but now she has a new family and lots of love.
My other cat is very jealous about her, but slowly the relation between them will be better.
I hope they'll be best friends.

very well written!

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I have a new cat

Hello! My name is Leyre and I want to tell you about my new cat. She was named Kaleshi by my girlfriend but I prefer to call her she Bowie because she has have a different coloured in her eyes (her eyes are different colours). One is ligthly blue and the other is yellow like amber the ambar, and her coat/fur hair is pure perfectly white. She is so beautifull and sweet.
 When she was approximately a year old she was abandoned,When she have, more or less, one year was abandoned in the streets, but now she has have a new family and a lot of love.
My other cat is very jealous of her about she, but bit by bit the situation between them is getting better. they are better.
I hope they'll be the best of friends.
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I have a new cat

Hello! My name is Leyre and I want to tell you about my new cat. She was named Kaleshi by my girlfriend but I prefer to call she her Bowie because she have  has a different colour in her eyes. One is ligthly blue and the other is yellow like the ambar amber, and her hair is perfectly white. She is so beautifull and sweet.
When she have was, more or less, one year old was abandoned in the streets, but now she have has a new family and lots of love.
My other cat is very jealous about she her, but bit by bit little by little the situation between they them are is getting better.
I hope they'll be the best friends.
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I have a new cat

Hello! My name is Leyre and I want to tell you about my new cat. She was named Kaleshi by my girlfriend but I prefer to call sheher Bowie because she havehas a different colours in her eyes. One is light blue and the other is yellow like the ambar, and her hair is perfectly white. She is so beautifull and sweet.
When she have, more or less, one year was abandoned in the streetsShe was abandoned in the street about one year ago, but now she havehas a new family and lot of love.
My other cat is very jelousjealous about sheher, but gradually the situation between theythem are better.
I hope they'll bebecome the best friends.

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I have a new cat

Hello! My name is Leyre and I want to tell you about my new cat. She was named Kaleshi by my girlfriend but I prefer to call she Bowie because she have a different colour in her eyes. One is ligthly blue and the other is yellow like the ambar, and her hair is perfectly white. She is so beautifull and sweet.

My name is Leyre, and I want to talk about my new cat. She was named Kaleshi by a female friend of mine, but I prefer to call her Bowie, because she has a different colour in each eye. One is light blue and the other is yellowish amber. And her hair is pure white .  She is so beautiful and sweet.

Note > By my girlfriend >Its ok, even though I initially thought that you were a guy. It's good to be more specific. / Perfectly white means the colour is white in a perfect way.


When she have, more e or less, one year was abandoned in the streets, but now have a new family and lot of love.

> When I found her, she was already roaming the streets, having been abandoned more or less about a year ago, but now she has found a new family that gives her a lot of love.

My other cat is very jelous about she, but bit by bit the situation between they are better.
I hope they'll be the best friends

>My other cat is very jealous of her, but the situation is getting better, since the relationship between them is improving gradually.


I hope they'll be the best friends.> I hope they will soon be the best of friends.




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