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Can you please correct my mistakes? My friend Giulio has just texed me to say how much is worried, he told me that his friend Marco is on holiday. Before leaving Marco had asked Giulio to look after his cat during is holiday and Giulio accepted. The cat ran away and now he doesn't know what to do. That's what I answered: I don't think you should call your friend, you know, cats usually go far away from home and then they just come back. I think you should wait a few days and then, if the cat does't come back home, you should warn your friend. Remember to leave the door open when you're into the house. If the cat won't come back, I think it would be nice if you bought another one for gift.

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Can you please correct my mistakes?

My friend Giulio has just texted me to say how worried he is. He told me that his friend Marco is on holiday. Before leaving Marco had asked Giulio to look after his cat while he was away, and Giulio accepted. The cat ran away and now he doesn't know what to do. This is how I replied: I don't think you should call your friend. you know, Cats usually stray far away from home, and then they just come back. I think you should wait a few days and then, if the cat doesn't return, you should warn your friend. Remember to leave the door open when you're in the house (or, 'when you're at home'). If the cat doesn't come back, I think it would be nice if you bought another one as a gift.


Well done, your English is very good.

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Can you please correct my mistakes?

My friend Giulio has just texed me to say how much is worried he is. He told me that his friend Marco is on holiday. Before leaving, Marco had asked Giulio to look after his cat during his holiday and Giulio accepted. The cat ran away and now he doesn't know what to do. That's what I answered This was my answer: I don't think you should call your friend, you know, cats usually often go (wander) far away from home and then they just come back. I think you should wait a few days and then, if the cat does't come back home, you should warn tell your friend. Remember to leave the door open when you're into the house. If the cat won't doesn't come back, I think it would be nice if you bought him another one cat for as a gift.


My notes:

Very well done! Only a few errors.

(I think your friend should tell Marco that his cat is missing in case he knows a good place to look for him/her.)

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