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Can you correct my mistakes, please? You are on holiday. Before leaving home you received a letter from your Scottish friend, Molly. Write a letter to send to your friend. In your letter, you should include: - how you are enjoying of your holidays - how long are you going to stay - what places have you visited Hi Molly, As promised, I’m writing this letter to tell you how I’m enjoying of my holiday in Madrid. We left one week ago to Madrid to visit the city for ten days. To this trip I come with my family, this are: my mother, my father, my brother and my boyfriend. We are staying at a hotel near Gran Via called “The time”. This hotel have big rooms and very confortables, but the best is your location next to shops, museums, restaurants and a market to buy fresh fruit and vegetables during that weeks. The first day we went to see a famous musical called “El Rey León”. It was wonderful! We enjoyed of a amazing performance for two hours. Then, we went to eat to a restaurant which has three Michelin stars “StreetXo”. This restaurant has a incredible food but it is very expensive. Also, yesterday we visited the park more famous in Madrid “El Retiro” which is very lovely. The next days we have planed to visit some museum like “El Prado”. Anyway, I’ll write you when I’m back to tell you all my travel. Love Brenda

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Hey this is pretty good, just a couple of bits to change : )



Hi Molly,
As promised, I’m writing this letter to tell you how I’m enjoying of my holiday in Madrid.
We left one week ago to Madrid to visit the city for ten days. To this trip I come with my family, this are: I am away with my whole family; my mother, my father, my brother and my boyfriend. We are staying at a hotel near Gran Via called “The Time”. This hotel have has big rooms and is very confortables comfortable, but the best part is your the location, next to shops, museums, restaurants and a market to buy fresh fruit and vegetables during that weeks.
The first day we went to see a famous musical called “El Rey León”. It was wonderful! We enjoyed of an amazing performance for two hours. Then, we went to eat to a restaurant which has three Michelin stars “StreetXo”. This restaurant has a incredible food but it is very expensive.
Also, yesterday we visited the park more famous most famous park in Madrid “El Retiro” which is very lovely. The next days we have planed to visit some museums like “El Prado”.
Anyway, I’ll write to you when I’m back to tell you all about my travels/ trip.
Love
Brenda

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