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Old friend After i had drank a cold water, i left my flat to visit my old friend. We have't seen each other from university study time, and that was a long time ago. Also, i shall go to the bank to take cash in case we decide to drink, and we will, i feel this. When i saw him, i noticed, that he hasn't changed. All the same cheerful and good-natured person, but prone to aggressive behavior if he can't do something. He offered me to go to the garden house and sit right here a little. Fortunately, the weather was hot, and the street was quiet. He was telling me about how he's is doing, where he works and what he does in his life. I know, that i shouldn't think like this, especially about friend, but his manner of talking has been making me mad. He did't give me a chance to say about how i'm doing. After that, he bringed the box of beer and started to devastate of bottles from alcohol and didn't pay attention on enybody else and keep talking about his philosophical stuff. i had thought, that if i go away from the house, he wouldn't even notice that. So i done that and when i have been going home i just heard that he had been continue talking, but alone for now. Good Meeting.

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Old friend

After I drank cold water, I left my flat to visit my old friend. We haven't seen each other since university, and that was a long time ago. Also, I had to go to the bank to take cash in case we decided to drink, and we would, I felt.
When I saw him, I noticed, that he hasn't changed. All the same cheerful and good-natured person, but prone to aggressive behavior if he couldn't do something. He offered me to go to the garden house and sit right there a little. Fortunately, the weather was hot, and the street was quiet.
He was telling me about how he's doing, where he works and what he does in his life. I know, that I shouldn't think like this, especially about a friend, but his manner of talking has been making me mad. He didn't give me a chance to say about how I'm doing. After that, he brought a box of beer and started to devastate bottles of alcohol and didn't pay attention to anybody else and kept talking about his philosophical stuff. I thought, that if I go away from the house, he wouldn't even notice that. So I did that and when I wad going home I just heard that he continued talking, but now alone.
Good Meeting.
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An old friend of mine.

After drinking some cold water/ After I had drank some cold water, I left my flat to visit an old friend of mine. We have not seen each other from since our university days, study time and that was a long time ago. Also, I  had to  go to my  bank to withdraw some money, take cash just in case we decided to go for a drink, something which I knew we would certainly do eventually. 
When I saw him, I noticed that he did not change much. He was All still the same cheerful and good-natured person that I used to know, but, unfortunately, he was still prone to fits of anger whenever he could not get what he wanted.  but prone to aggressive behavior if he can't do something. He invited offered me into his to go to the garden house, and we sat inside the house  for a while .right here a little. (Fortunately, ) The weather was hot, and the street was quiet.( Why is it fortunate ? You never elaborate.)
He told was telling me about how he was doing, where he was working and about the other things he was doing does in his life. I know that I shouldn't think of anyone like this, much more /especially about/ a friend, but the way he held his conversation   of manner of talking made me really  annoyed with him has been making me mad. He did't give me a chance to tell him how I was doing. say about how i'm doing. After talking for some time, he brought out a crate of beer  the box of beer and started to polish them off one by one -- all the time without paying any attention to what I told him --while  devastate of bottles from alcohol and didn't pay attention on enybody else and keep he kept talking on and on about some philosophical stuff of his. So engrossed he was with himself that I had even thought that, if I had gone out from his house, he wouldn't have even noticed my absence .that. So Unable to bear his monologue any longer, I did just that. And when I reached home,  have been going home I just heard that he was still talking, only that there was no one listening to him now. .  had been continue talking, but alone for now. )))
Good Meeting.
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