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In China, parents always help their kids (maybe use "children" if this is a formal text) when as possible as they can. They even making (make) some important choices for their kids ,but they don't didn't care about what their kids thoughts think .Because of they think that it is good for their kids development. As a result, kids always obey their parents will when it comes to/ in terms/in relation to of the their child's development and education.
If parents decided decision can lead their kids to joining an improvement class (or use "tutoring class"). , In order to enhance the opportunities that to get excellent college (or use "university" ) offers.They Parents will insist on the decision, even if their kids are do not like it at all.
However ,in America parents are likely to be have respect for their kids opinions and to pay more attention on to their opinions when they are making the decision.
Parents in China are think highly of education that mybe approval (?).Nevertheless,they should to learn the strategy that what of American parents, to balance the relations between their kids when they talking about learning stuff.
Please see my comment below for the full text with corrections. :) Good job!!!
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